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| JelloKnee |
Hey people.
Really dig the site, some quality here.
Here's my contribution, feedback is welcome :)
cheers,
Jello.
forvige the gaps ;-)
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| Axolotyl |
Just gave your track a listen.
Theres a lot in this tune and it has a nice goa trancey feel to it. I think theres some really cool elements to this tune. Some mad filtering going on. The bass is very solid and gritty. The subtle changes in beat are very cool and give the tracka lot of attitude.
As far as percs go, the kick could do with more emphasis. Its very low a the moment and lacks a good midrange attack. Usual story... try layering a few nice kicks and eq out the bits you like to get more punch in it. Also I think the highhats are too loud at the moment and really clutter up the midrange a bit. They could do with some morge aggressive EQing.
Not a fan of the synth at 3.02. It feels very casual compared to the tweaked out nature of the rest of the track. The big filtered sweeps at 2.30 are a bit too much imho. You could lower them in the mix I think for a more subtle effect or try compressing them to a narrower frequency mebe?
But anyway, pretty insane tweaked out track. Like it a lot. Has all the elements to keep me interested but could do with some more attention to the mix. |
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| pho mo |
Damn man, this is teh funky! The bass is really awesome and the overall tune is really danceable.
There are some really nice melodies coming in, especially the one that comes in at 2:20 and develops really nicely around 3:30.
Fast melody at around 5:00 is excellent too.
The production is really tight, only thing is some of the highs are pretty full-on, had to turn the treble down a little on the hifi lol. The open hat sounds a little bit harsh, and the main synth gets really hissy when you crank open the filters.
Some of the sounds are pretty raw as well, sounds like they could do with some more fx ( e.g pad at 3:29 in the left speaker )
Mix-wise, everything is always really clear so good on that one sherlock. Love the flanging too :D
Overall top tune man, can't wait to hear your next one! |
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| JelloKnee |
Hey guys... thanks for the awesome feedback...
it's all logical and makes alotta sense to me.
i'll try and double my efforts in the future :)
need to work on my mixing... no doubt... heh
kudos,
Jello.
will try something a bit more trancey for my next one...
still gettin used to this style. |
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