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Sound Of Heaven - Xternal...I would appreciate any comment..
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| Sound Of Heaven |
Hello everbody....Please listen to one of mytrack I've done in the past few months because I think it does have potential...
It is more like a progressive trance type of track...
LISTEN THE TRACK HERE (stream)
ALL comments are welcome.. |
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| marcusk |
Hey there...
Listening to your track...Just thought I'd comment on a few things.
- The Intro: Build up of drum elements is good. I didn't like the string too much though. It didn't seem to "build up" to the break.
- The Break: I like the leads you used here.
- Main Melody: Just seemed to kinda repeat from the break. Also with the melody, try playing the melody not always on the 1 beat. Meaning, instead of *-*-*-*- try -*-*-*-* to get more of a fluid sound cause it sounding too straight forward.
I'm not sure if I would label it as a Progressive track though. Maybe more of a chilled out trance tune.
Keep up the good work though. |
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| Sound Of Heaven |
Thank you very much for your effort and comments...Yeah its more chilled than progressive i agree:)...
I will use your suggestions...btw can you please explain what did you mean with *_*_*_...i tried but i really dont understand ;)
Greetz, Sound Of Heaven |
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