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Tukan - Light A Rainbow (SubSun Remix)
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| Cynical |
Ah
It's hard to give constructive criticism on something like this, 'cunstructive critiscm' is harder still.
I'll just say this - desist. |
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| Project 7 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Cynical
Ah
It's hard to give constructive criticism on something like this, 'cunstructive critiscm' is harder still.
I'll just say this - desist. |
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| ronk |
| quote: | Originally posted by Cynical
I'll just say this - desist. |
oh that helps a lot...
ok my thoughts about your track:
make the kick louder, decrease the volume of that synth and add more percussions.
until 1:50 the whole intro part is basically the same pattern, with that synth, hihats and kick. change it, be creative, add more instruments, percussions, think of new fx...make your track interesting.
break part is kinda long and boring.
ok I see the whole track is repetitive...
you don't have bass. your melody and main lead synth are weak, I think you should add more layers to the melody.
hmm ok, very noobish track :) but the first thing I think you should do with your next track is to create lots of new sounds, to make it interesting, to try and catch the listener's attention. |
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| Project 7 |
| Thanks for the reviews guys. Great help, i will work on the track, if i get no where, i'll start a totally different one but keep your advice in mind :) |
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| Misiorowski |
| Give up producing. Life is too short to waste on things you're not capable of doing right. |
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| Project 7 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Misiorowski
Give up producing. Life is too short to waste on things you're not capable of doing right. |
Lol yeah, ive only been producing for 2 months so.... |
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| R.j. |
ok, well it's basically a bunch of nothing until 1:50.... so shorten that up BY ALOT.
Everything is too DRY. no good there also...
the snare @ 2:50=ish is annoying, shorten or get rid of.
3:14-15... Sounded like the snare was going to be followed by OMG part, obviously not...
k, so did u do this like in 20 minutes? cuz if u did, u did a very bad job. SORRY, juz giving my honest opinion
oh and @ 7:43???? wth, wats wit the cutoff being so... SHORT, and that last lil effect u use is bad take it out, or juz end wit a crash.
this track, is uhh... beyond bad! once again, sorry
i give it a: .5/10 |
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