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The Star And The Wiseman - Wimoweh
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| TheWiseman |
Hello TranceAddicts,
I have been into music for some time now and I was told of this forum by a friend and so I decided to join this place and contribute with some music and of course my opinion on your tracks.
First of all, here is my newest work, I did this with a friend of mine and it has a quite fun African vocal sample in it. I used FL Studio 5 to make it. So please listen and have some fun ;)
We're thinking of doing a radio club edit of it cause that would suit better, I will post that one when it is done.
Here is the link to it: Wimoweh
Thanks :D
TheWiseman |
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| websley |
I'm listing now...
Good percussion. The vocals are kind of funny:D Somehow around 2 minutes, I started to laugh really hard!:haha: Nice humor in this one, mate;) Didn't quite like what you did with the breakdown. Not only that bass comes in too early, also the "tension --> release"-point is too weak. I like the atmosphere here, though. And there you go, again those vocals:D Happy tune overall:)
-weBs |
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| RickyM |
This is class mate, I really enjoyed listening to this - very happy tune!
In the breakdown - you need more depth - maybe a low string. Synths are nice and fit the tune well.
I like it when it comes in after the breakdown - you did a cool tune here mate - vocal samples are great :D |
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| TheWiseman |
| thanks for the tips guys, I'll work on the break! any update will be posted here off course :) |
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| Elujin |
| hey this si pretty cool - very diff from what I usualyl hear on here. nice happy melody - great work on it! Very nice drum work too! |
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| Sunclyder |
Welcome, it's my turn :happy2:
I like your song mate!!
Bassline, arp-pads, letter pad are quiet good, you must make correction in 3:11 (superwave) becouse this maybe filtration is bad,
fine vocal hehe - Zulus,
Very optimist song
Greetzzzz from THORN |
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| TheWiseman |
| thanks for the comments! I'll take a look at that too! |
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| Jay M |
Hey buddy, very nice track! ;)
These vocals are so funny.
Looking forward to the radio edit, must become pretty awesome. :p
-Jay |
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| TheWiseman |
Thnx Jay M!
I really appreciate your comments! |
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| TheWiseman |
| anyone else dares to give this African Trance a try? :haha: :stongue: |
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