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[trance] Jelle - Summerbreeze
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| Jelle |
hi,
this is only my third track or so.
192 kbps, 5m:17s
made this during the last couple of days, a total of about 8hrs.
the meaning was to create kind of a "summer-feeling" song
entirely made in fruityloops 4 , with only the standard stuff.
lemme know what you think
:cool: download here |
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| ZzZ The Goddess |
| Starts off kind of electro, I really like the melody after 3 minutes but this track could def use some better stronger synths and some effects after 4 minutes it kind of sounds 80's ish. Mayvbe a harder kick as well. Not horrible for a third track but i am a newbie myself so who am I to talk :p |
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| Luke Terry |
melody is really nice, production is pretty crap though. it would sound a whole lot better with a better bassdrum
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| Jelle |
thx for reviewing!
yep that's my problem, the kick and basses.
I manage to make it sound quit good on my own speakers, but I find it hard to master something so that it sounds good on every system....
any tips? |
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| Krogen |
Intro -- too much beat. My speakers are jumping up and down :)
40 sec -- come on, what's with the Mario beat? ;)
1:50 -- like it!
3:40 -- too much or too crappy drums.
To me, this sounds like music from the oldie hackers movie. Could be a lot better if you'd play with the beat cause the melody is quite nice. |
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| Four_On_Four-er |
| I enjoyed it. The melody was indeed nice, but I, for some reason wasn't rubbed the wrong was by those drums... oh wait... ha, I forgot to turn my subwoofer all the way up! Yep, there's too much too early bass, but I'm still not complaining. |
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| Jelle |
thx for reviewin
im working on it! |
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