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| six senses |
Hello fellow producers,
A few months ago i've finished a new trance track. Maybe you people could review it, because there are some things in the track which i'm not fully satisfied about. Maybe you could give me some tips on the track. Here's the link:
http://www.zwaluwengramsbergen.nl/s...ancetrack96.mp3
It's produced in Reason 2.5
Total time apr. 8.50 min.
Enjoy.
Greetz,
Six Senses:) |
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| Jelle |
I have no negative comments about this.
nice track!
suggestions: emphasize your breakdowns a little more, gives the listener more time to catch some breath :) and gives more contrast to your buildups.
keep it up! |
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| six senses |
| quote: | Originally posted by Jelle
I have no negative comments about this.
nice track!
suggestions: emphasize your breakdowns a little more, gives the listener more time to catch some breath :) and gives more contrast to your buildups.
keep it up! |
Thanx mate. And thanx for the tip.
More reviews?:) |
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| Snowave |
yeah this is a nice track but agree then a little bit with sixsense and jelle do about breaks but it s neither wrong to have a pulsive track as this.
Could nt done a better by myself.
Peace §=o) Snowave |
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| Evolve140 |
| Aside from the obvious lack of sound quality (96kbps), I'd say you have a pretty solid foundation right from the start. I like that bass instrument and the rhythm it's producing. You might want to take it easy on the reverse symbols. At this point I'm enjoying the sound so much I wish it were full quality. At your first break down at around 2:20, I wish there was more of a melodic statement being pronounced right there, it comes in a little later. Your melody is excellent, but I'm defintely feeling an overload of those reverse symbols! At 3:44 it's defintely rocking my entire house, and a friend has just come in from the other room to hear. I like the break beats in your second break down, and I'm really glad you brought back that melody. I like the change in dynamics. 7:10, your outro is still strong, it's resonating with energy from the climax. Great presentation, my negative feedback is in regard to your use of reverse symbols, I think they're over used, I'm sure you can break it down another way. Also, the sound quality is kind of discouraging. 9/10, great job! |
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| six senses |
| quote: | Originally posted by Evolve140
Aside from the obvious lack of sound quality (96kbps), I'd say you have a pretty solid foundation right from the start. I like that bass instrument and the rhythm it's producing. You might want to take it easy on the reverse symbols. At this point I'm enjoying the sound so much I wish it were full quality. At your first break down at around 2:20, I wish there was more of a melodic statement being pronounced right there, it comes in a little later. Your melody is excellent, but I'm defintely feeling an overload of those reverse symbols! At 3:44 it's defintely rocking my entire house, and a friend has just come in from the other room to hear. I like the break beats in your second break down, and I'm really glad you brought back that melody. I like the change in dynamics. 7:10, your outro is still strong, it's resonating with energy from the climax. Great presentation, my negative feedback is in regard to your use of reverse symbols, I think they're over used, I'm sure you can break it down another way. Also, the sound quality is kind of discouraging. 9/10, great job! |
Thanks for the tips mate. I'm going to work on the track next week to fix some things. and then i will post a better quality. alright.
:) :)
more reviews? |
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| adidas_pump |
I really like this track!
Nothing bad to say about it, everything looks quite alright, the structure is very tidy and clean...
keep up the EXCELLENT work :toothless |
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| RIPassion |
Wow, great reason work! I know how frustrating it can be to keep the malstrom lead sounding good at such high pitches, and you did a great job with that :) (is that even a malstrom lead or is it a sample? that sounds pretty good! I wish I could make that phat of a lead with reason :()
Did you do any work on it outside of reason? Please check your PMs. :) |
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| music2dance2 |
| This is good work mate defo need a better bit rate sample but i like the way it lifts through out. get this to some labels mate no question, unless you already have haha |
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| ZeroVII |
I don't usually reply on these, but I felt the particular need to this time..
This is pretty solid. :) Pretty impressive sounds that you're getting out of Reason.
I like the melody, about the only thing I could possibly suggest is to give maybe *a bit* more time for buildup from the Intro.
Aside from that, VERY solid..
PM me if you haven't got a label on this yet.
~j |
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| six senses |
| Thanx all! i haven't got a label for it yet. But i might going to send this to some labels. Any suggestions? :) |
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| Mycron |
quality track Sebastiaan, really good Reason work!:)
maybe add a few more fxes to some places, and it will be all good,
keep up the impressive work, mate:)
cheers,
Peter:) |
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