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Dream Trance *Voyager* , Ready to be destroyed by your comments :P.
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| kopi_luwak |
Hi there,
This is my latest track, and I hope this time I get more reviews than the last time :rolleyes:. This one it's Dream Trance, and I called it *Voyager* inspired in the Voyager 1 of NASA.
Feedback is very welcome, and plz, if I made you a review, the best thing you can do it's to return me one ;).
Voyager Direct Stream
Kopi =o |
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| kopi_luwak |
Hey mate thanx for those sites!"
About the Kick, would be better if you explain me why is so terrible, because you dont give me any clue why is that bad so I can work on it :eek:. Bass, I think you are right, gonna compress it a bit and maybe to add a stereo enchancer or sort of.
Thanx for the feedback ;).
Kopi =o. |
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| alexpea |
| kick = sounds like you've ripped it straight off a 64 kbps-tune or something. So, it sounds too "wrapped in" Needs to have more air. |
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| kopi_luwak |
| quote: | Originally posted by alexpea
kick = sounds like you've ripped it straight off a 64 kbps-tune or something. So, it sounds too "wrapped in" Needs to have more air. |
I will take it in consideration in next update ;).
Kopi =o. |
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| DJ KaRiM NeT |
mm try to get better samples there are alot of quality free samples on da internet . (kick)
and sorry didn't like da vocals
u need effects .. etc
and eq you layers also :)
sorry not my cup of tea :) |
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| kopi_luwak |
| quote: | Originally posted by DJ KaRiM NeT
mm try to get better samples there are alot of quality free samples on da internet . (kick)
and sorry didn't like da vocals
u need effects .. etc
and eq you layers also :)
sorry not my cup of tea :) |
Hehehe thanx for the feedback, about the Kick, dunno why u guys find it that bad, sounds pretty Deep to me, I will send to some mor epeep and see what they think abou the kick, but I will take it in consideration.
Kopi =o. |
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| Xavi |
I think the kick just needs one more layer on top...one thats not so deep. The bass sounds like it has an echo or something, but other than that its not bad. The piano is nice. Where did you get the vocals from?
Xavi |
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| mark_the_gooner |
nice pad at the start..
the kick is ok, maybe u should make it a bit less bassy.
bass sounds fine, fits in well with the track.
nice piano + good percs (a little bit too sharp though)
vocals are pretty good, though they sound familiar (are they ripped from another song?)
track has a nice feel to it, the percs need quietening slightly though. |
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| iloop |
great intro, solid deep bass line w/ deep groove going. The piano sounds nice, and i really dig those hi'hats. Smooth chillout track, the vocals are not really understandable and i feel could use a bit of work, but everything else seems nice :)
thanks for sharing. |
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| Beyer |
This is nice! I can agree that the kick lacks some hi freqs. It sounds abit choked in the hi freq area. Another sample on top there, that isn't as choked would make it sound better. Although, it sounds nice when it's blended with the pad and piano. But alone it sounds abit lo-fi.
Nice one mate! |
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| cybernetica |
Loving the intro, really good bassline and pads.
The piano sounds cool, works well with the other sounds. I think the hissing hihats seem a bit too dominant compared to the rest. Other than that, its a fun track, nice dreamy feeling! Keep it up! |
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