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Krivi - Life is a sea [192kbps]
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| krivi |
Please give me some feedback on my new tune,is kick weak,what about pads and structure?
Krivi - Life is a sea ( RIGHT CLICK + SAVE AS... ) |
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| eulerfx |
| something wrong with the mp3 |
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| krivi |
i dunno what's the problem mate?
for me it work without problem. |
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| eulerfx |
| the file is only 8 kb |
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| krivi |
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| ronk |
you need to copy the link to a new window and press enter.
the 8kb file you downloaded is actually a gif picture.
bout the track itself:
mmm intro...kinda standart percs, but thery're good.
like those pads, they fit the track's name imo :) maybe add a sample of a real sea or smth in the background..
nice synths.
the kick really is a bit weak in the main parts of the track :p
nice break. the lead is quite thin.
like this melody.
overall very good job. |
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| Digital Aura |
Hey Krivi...
Your link doesnt work...its just a gif!
As RONK says, you have to type the dang thing all out! BLAH!
Im not lazy so I did! LOL
Nice intro...love those synths that come in after the intro percs!! AMAZING! Such a fresh sounding lead! Subtle yet powerful! Sounds like a combination of one of those Japanese flutes and a female voice...nice.
The song seemed a tad long. I was looking for a really intense re-entry of the song after the break but it didnt come in as strongly as I had hoped.
Still, the melody really brings it! Solid production too! Great levels, good crisp percs, no timing issues.
BANG ON!:D |
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| Nomen Nescio |
Hey Krivi,
Just listened to your track. It is clear you have some producing talent. The build up is really good, good atmosphere, the percussion is good. I love the effects that you use and the pads are really nice.
But frankly the track as a whole doesn't do it for me. The break itself and what happens after it makes the track monotonous. There is hardly a melody change. You introduce a nice lead synth sound but the track goes on just like it did during the build up. That is a bit of a let down.
Furthermore, the EQ'ing is way to high. The track sounds a bit light and sharp. If you would add a bit more bass in the track and lower the highs a bit it would sounds better.
Overal the track is very decent apart from the monotonous ongoing melody.
Cheers!
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| krivi |
| thanx guys,very useful tips |
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