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Harmonic Tremors & Redub----------H-LAB
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| Tech0rz |
I think that synth is too strong, the one that comes in every now and again.
Infact the sound levels are in dyer need of attention.
The kick is really weak. compared to everything else.
Try >these < (courtest of Sirroco)
Nice pattern to the main synth tho. but it never ends or changes throughout the song.
It overall sounds too cluttered. Work on Mastering and EQing to get things to sit in the mix better. I keep hearing horrible buzzing. Try working on each part for longer until its JUST how u want it. I'm always playing constantly with volume/pan, EQ's and such to make sure its sounding right. There are plenty of resources out there, start with the stickies on the production board.
But however, i don't want to discourage you by any means, keep up the good work, and stick with it. Practice makes perfect (and research :p ) |
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| Digital Aura |
Yeah definitely comin in there way too loud!
Doesnt help having that overamped distortion FX on it...makes it sound like it is clipping!
The pads are also not musically in the same key as the leads. The melody is a killer hook! I like it! I'd smooth that lead down a tad. Its alright when you scale the volume back in the fade out, but I'd also consider a slight filter sweep on it to take the edge off it. That would create some good tension as well!
Great song though! Congrats on #2 spot there! Never seen those Canadian boards before. I'll have to check out!;) |
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| H-LAB |
| quote: | Originally posted by H-LAB
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| kopi_luwak |
Hey, listening, that first Phat synth that appears when it's being released out with the filter is too loud and creates distorsion though.
LOL ... at 1:34 u ing scared the out of me LOL, I was like, dreamy pad, yum yum *AHHHHHHHH* haqha.
In overall, the Track has kinda a sweet style, but u need to work a lot ur mastering dood, plus balance ur sounds because some are totally out of the range, but I liked the melodys, nice thang u have here, good work :).
Kopi =o. |
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| H-LAB |
Thanks for the feedback!
Your tracks aren't that bad at all! Keep it up!
@ NEW TRACKS UP TONIGHT @
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| cartlemmy |
| Ya! that main melody is really nice. I know what y'all are saying about the production, but I kind of like the harshness of it. |
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| H-LAB |
| quote: | Originally posted by cartlemmy
Ya! that main melody is really nice. I know what y'all are saying about the production, but I kind of like the harshness of it. |
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Thanks for the feedback!!
I have 2 new tracks up !!!
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Check em out!!!
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| Axolotyl |
mmm... crunchy
theres some clipping or noise right at the start I think.
, this track is totally clipping actually. Try bringing your levels down to less than 0bd ... red is bad mmmm..kay =)
Other than that... melody is a bit repeditive. Try working on your actualy sounds too. That one on the main melody smacks of swedish euro pop or something. Otherwise nice vocal sample (could do with less delay on it though) and the overall groove you have going is kinda cool. =) |
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| H-LAB |
| quote: | Originally posted by cartlemmy
Ya! that main melody is really nice. I know what y'all are saying about the production, but I kind of like the harshness of it. |
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