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Nexus !!! (reworked)
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| Amfora |
Hi mates,
Here a sample of Nexus. This track was created by me 1 year ago. This is a total reworked version. I thought it is a good track but with reason 3 a got to polish it :p Im busy with this one and im curious if someone likes it.
For now its just a sample, there comes more :D
I also put the old version on it. So you can check out the changes.
Old version
Http://www.d-m-e.nl/download/nexusold.mp3
Reworked Version
Http://www.d-m-e.nl/download/Amfora-Nexus(sample).mp3
Enjoy ;) |
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| eulerfx |
- i like the strong, techy bass
- that synthwork in the break sounds really nice
- overall good track, but i suggest you add a lot more little, detailed things throughout. listen to tracks by Haak, like Bedlam for example and see what I'm talking about. |
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| Amfora |
| thnx for the feedback. About the drums: They are mono :p dumb me..... :D There is more variation to come when i worked this one out. |
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| Nomen Nescio |
Hey mate,
No idea if you have listened to the comment above but the kick now is way too loud ;) It pounds through my speakers.
For the rest I like what I am hearing, very intresing percussional fx. The break itself is original but ouch again the kick really comes BLASTING in ;)
The leadsound is intresting but a bit monotonous. I like the build up of the track more than what happens after the break. You could make it more melodic but maybe it was intended to be a bit more progressive.
Anyways, good effort.
Cheers,
Nomen Nescio |
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| Elujin |
I love this song. The rmake has some elements from Junkie XL's rendiiton of World on Fire (by sara mclauchlin - dont know how/why I heard it). I definitely want to hear the finished product, oh and the pan is great! :)
keep it going dude! |
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| Romi |
| Very cool track. I like the lead very much, original and catchy. Maybe a bit more reverb on it should be better imo. |
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| Stu Cox |
Nice synths etc, nice feel to it and some really good ideas
The kick sounds a bit thin and I think although the perc you've got is really good it could do with more in there. I also think the bassline needs to be louder.
All in all a good effort, just a few things to sort out to turn it into a really good tune |
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| Amfora |
thnx for all the usefull comments.
first of all i have to tell that im working on the reworked version and wht u can download is still under construction :D (Nomen Nescio : there are no changes made after i dropped this topic)
The track is in a early stage and im working real hard on this one. I keep u aLL UPDATED :p |
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| djrenco |
hey Johan:D how are you doing?:D
very nice stuff mate, i like the these left-right synths.. kick sounds very strong:) bassline is missing some low freq. and the mastering isn't really good.. a little dump;)
cheers
Renco |
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