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| mark_the_gooner |
well heres a tune i started a while ago but only recently been working on it. it was meant to be progressive but ended up quite trancy.
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all feedback welcome of course.
Updated: 26 April |
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| eulerfx |
- percs are a little too common in intro and they seem kind of detached from the track, and u should change that clap.
- bass + synth sound pretty good, but they repeat too much. its pretty much the same thing for 2 minutes
- the breakdown is a bit empty. add noise fx in there to give some atmosphere and drive, so the kick doesnt come back too suddenly
- overall, i think this is a good start, but you should keep working to add more elements, i.e. make the strings louder. :) |
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| mark_the_gooner |
| yea, i struggle with drumloops :/ i'll have to listen to alot more commercial stuff. |
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| eulerfx |
| quote: | Originally posted by mark_the_gooner
yea, i struggle with drumloops :/ i'll have to listen to alot more commercial stuff. |
don't listen to commercial stuff. listen to Juno Reactor. :D |
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| mark_the_gooner |
ok. ive done lots more work on the track now, would like some reviews =)
and gave it a name too :p |
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| sooper |
Hey Mark,
Sounds pretty cool.
I think that melody that repeats from the beginning could use a little variation. And background pads are greatley missed :(
I like the dirty bass that comes in after 1:30.
I think overall the tune needs a little more variation, especially in the percs. I like the 'sticky' rim shot loop - that's funky.
You've got the right idea - keep at it!
Trevor |
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| Nemesis44 |
Hey Mark,
Nice track, very minimal but it works and it gives a really nice feeling of space on the overall mix.
Keep up the good work.
cheers
Nem |
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