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updated! [Trance] Romi - A Melody (demo-cut)
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| Romi |
Hi all,
I've finally find me some inspiration for a new track. After some reworked tracks i'm now busy with a new one. No real title yet, but i hope you enjoy this sample of the new track. It's a bit of a Tiesto sound. Here it is (longer and improved sample):
http://www.sitesled.com/members/romi/A%20Melody.MP3
I've to work on the effects some more, but other suggestions to make the track better are as allways welcome.
ps. maybe someone knows a good title?
-Ron |
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| Darkness_Hero |
| intro is absolutely cool :O ,overall is pretty cool for my taste |
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| Romi |
| Thx for the reply Darkness_Hero. Anyone else with some comments? I'm gonna work on it tomorrow, so any input would be nice. |
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| groundzero74 |
| This sounds really good, too bad it's only a piece of the song, would really like to listen to the complete track ... what did you use to create this ? |
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| Romi |
| I'm glad you liked it so far groundzero74. I've made this song with Reason 3.0 btw. Any more input maybe? |
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| groundzero74 |
More input, ok...
I don'tknow if you intended it to be this way , but during the break there are no crash cymbals or something else to mark the start/end/buildup of the part. Not that this is a bad thing, but since the melody is somewhat off-beat this desorientated me somewhere in the middle of the break, during the first auditioning...
The sound choice = great, the strings are epic, the bass line during the break cannot is hardly audible, and it deserves to be heard.
Now the Beat... is something i always spend a lot of time on in my productions to get it to fit just right, yours could be more snappy if you know what i mean...
Everyhing i say here is just to help you make the song even better, i think this one's got potential... but maybe you need more experienced TA's to review it ... i haven't been released myself so who am i to give advice hey ... |
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| Romi |
Thx groundzero74. Great to finally have some comments i can work with. Some answers to your questions. No, the break was not final yet, i've been working on it today, and there are now a lot more effects in it including cymbals:) (it sounds a lot better now). I think the kick is ok now, but i will take another look at it. Thanx again for your comments.
The final version is almost finished now, i will let you guys know.:) |
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| Jay M |
Hi Romi.
Nice synth work in this one. I like the track.
I think the bassline could use more color, it's too far back in the mix. Would bring more drive. Percs are pretty crisp, maybe just a tad too upfront.
Nice work overall!!
-Jay |
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| Romi |
Thanks for the reply Jay M.
A longer and improved sample is now available, same link. I'm not completely happy with it yet, but it sounds allready a lot better imo.
I'm curious what you think. |
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| JoeyEnv |
Awesome tune dude. :)
As for a name, im getting,"Eastern Sun" or "Sunset Awakens" etc... anything along those lines. |
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| Romi |
| Thx JoeyEnv. And also thx for the titles you came up with, maybe i use one of those:) . |
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| _Marco_ |
| like it, that melody is really great! thumbs up |
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