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[Energy Trance] Bienstman_J._-_Lightness (Full Version)
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| groundzero74 |
Hello,
This is the first track i'm putting up here on TA , it's a full version but there is lots of room for improvement.
I could use some constructive feedback on the : sounds & quality , melody , arrangement etc...
Track info:
Title : "Lightness"
Genre : Trance
Duration : 6:14
Bitrate : 112kbps (high quality encoded) / 5mb
Link:
Bienstman_J._-_Lightness.mp3
Thank you for listening :) |
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| TheWiseman |
Hi there,
nice track!
percussion is good, a lot of nice effects also! keeps it very alive :)
melody and synths could use some power and phatness
keep up the good work!
grtz,
TheWiseman |
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| groundzero74 |
thx for the review !
| quote: | | melody and synths could use some power and phatness |
Yeah actually i was holding back the volume a little on the Synths and Main riff , fearing it would make the whole thing too busy ... but i'm going to get to it ...
anything on the bassline ? too loud in the mix ? |
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| Darkone55 |
Beginning sounds quite ok, the idea of that panning is nice, but i think it's a bit too much... You don't need to pan that, just make it sound wide. :)
Then, it's very nice! Untill the bass comes in. I don't like it, it's a too standart trance-bass, and it's too loud imo.
At about 45 secs or something the kick lost too much of it's energy, I think because of the bass. Hmm, that tune is ok, but (also for the synth) it a bit standart.
The climax is not that smashing.. Not special either. I'm sorry, I expected it would be a great track, but when the bass comes in, it's noting special anymore.
The leads could be a lot louder, and the bass a lot less louder.
Percussion is quite ok, but not very energic.
The rest is well produced. ;) |
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| groundzero74 |
Thanks for the feedback,
| quote: | | I expected it would be a great track, but when the bass comes in, it's noting special anymore. |
ok, you mean right after the buildup during break right ? could you pin-poin the time in the song ? thx
About the bassline . . .i though so already ... too loud.
Will try and fix it ... |
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| Darkone55 |
| quote: | Originally posted by groundzero74
Thanks for the feedback,
ok, you mean right after the buildup during break right ? could you pin-poin the time in the song ? thx
About the bassline . . .i though so already ... too loud.
Will try and fix it ... |
Well, the percussion is good, the kick is good, it looks soo promesing! But unfortunately it went a different way, and it's starting to look like a standart-nothing-special-trance-track when the bass comes in. That about eh.. 20 secs or so I thought.
Good luck, I like Belgian artists like MIKE and Soulwax. :P |
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| Romi |
| Very nice track, a lot of energy in it. Nice break, a bit sudden how it gets to the climax then, work on the build-up some more, but the melody of the climax is very cool and again has a lot of energy. I think if you improve the break a bit it should be a great trancer. -Ron |
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| groundzero74 |
| M.I.K.E ... of course he's the man! ... i'll take your advice and try to cook up a new bassline, and ill get that climax more uplifting ... thanks... |
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| groundzero74 |
| quote: | | Nice break, a bit sudden how it gets to the climax then, work on the build-up some more, |
Yeah, you're right .. i just didn't notice when creating the track... too close hey... i'll extend it and creat a more flowing transition...
Thanks for the advice dude ... |
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