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My first finished trance tune! Please tell me your thoughts...
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| Spearfish |
Hello fellow tranceaddicts...
I've been reading posts and downloading your songs on here for about six months and have been honestly blown away by the talent on here. I finally put an entire track together and would love to hear what some trained ears have to say.
DJ Angell - Beneath the Waves
I set up this site at mp3unsigned.com. Can't wait to get some feedback!
Cheers,
DjAngell |
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| electrohit |
well if it's your first track ever thats not bad , you got alot of stuff to work on , i'm listening with crappy headphones atm , so it's hard to say but your sound needs alot of work + where's da kick m8?
the beat is kinda empty , but keep on working , that's a start..
have a nice day |
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| Spearfish |
thanks for the feedback...
sounds like the kick is plenty loud to me. maybe i just didn't do a good job mastering? :rolleyes: any other suggestions to help improve my sound then?
i suppose that "professional" sound can be fairly elusive...
cheers,
DjAngell |
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| IKKI-ZUVK |
| EQ the kick & Hi Hats |
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| C-3 |
Good Melody, But I thought the bass is a bit to Cheesy. :)
Keep up the good work!
Cheers! :cool: |
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| Spearfish |
eq the bass and hats... what should i do? emphasize the high end on the hats and the low end on the kick? is it usually that simple? i didn't mess with any eq stuff b/c i've never had any idea where to go with it...
cheesy bass? i pretty much agree, but starting out i want to first be able to achieve a decent sound, even if it is a bit cheesy :tongue2 thanks for the compliment on the melody.
i'm headed out of town til tuesday, i'll work on all that stuff when i get back.
thanks again guys!
DjAngell |
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| mark_the_gooner |
I think u should lower the pitch on the kick firstly.
Try and stretch the bassline a bit (add more release), and either quieten it or add gain in the higher frequencies and remove gain in the lower frequencies because it is a very deep round bass that doesn't fit in the track very well.
Other than that it is a good track especially for a first. |
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