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Airwave - Alone In The Dark (Goddess' Remix) 192Kbps Sample
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| ZzZ The Goddess |
I just started working on a remix of Alone in the Dark. Please listen and tell me what you think about it so far ;) Suggestions welcome :) Sounds different than my last song. I havent really developed a style yet :p
Thanks
Airwave - Alone In The Dark (Goddess Remix) |
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| Invertika |
This is on its way to being a pretty good remix. To me, it sort of sounds kind of like an Airwave production anyway, minus Airwave's signature huge kick drum (not saying yours is though ;) )
production is a little bit on the muddy side, and I think some of the levels of the different parts need just a bit of evening out.
Arrangement is pretty good so far, but i don't want to say much about it, coz its a remix and thats up to you how you want to interpret the tune ;)
i hope i didn't sound really harsh, i think this has good potential :)
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| ZzZ The Goddess |
| quote: | Originally posted by Invertika
This is on its way to being a pretty good remix. To me, it sort of sounds kind of like an Airwave production anyway, minus Airwave's signature huge kick drum (not saying yours is though ;) )
production is a little bit on the muddy side, and I think some of the levels of the different parts need just a bit of evening out.
Arrangement is pretty good so far, but i don't want to say much about it, coz its a remix and thats up to you how you want to interpret the tune ;)
i hope i didn't sound really harsh, i think this has good potential :)
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Not harsh at all I am still a newb so I need all the constructive critisism i can get. Thanks for the review honey :) |
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| kopi_luwak |
Hey,
Listening .... The Synth in the Intro, sounds too mechanic/Sequenced, I would humanize it a bit cuze sounds too Preset though, those synths in the background are really cools, add a lot of support to the track. Bass, not bad, but u need to Master a bit ur kick, right now sounds like the bass is fighting with the Kick for the Low Range of Freqs. Another thing, are u using any kind of Presets? I mean for the sequences, sounds like Vanguard Gates/Arpegios, as I mentioned before :D.
In overall, is going pretty cool, u have good sound, I just would work a bit more the Mastering and instead to use presets I would do some my own arpgeios, good work :D.
Keep it up ;).
Kopi =o. |
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| Subtle |
listening:
i like the synths actually.. but the rhythm sounds a bit basic.. but its not completed now is it ;) |
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| ZzZ The Goddess |
| Thanks for the feedback guys, will def post and update tonight. |
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| Massive84 |
Your beat is basic, a kick and a hat, your mixing isn't good.
First things first.
Try to practice beats .
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...22Percussion%22
here is something Nik made, really a good read for beginners.
mixing is just experience , after loooooots of time it will come from it self ( at least thats what happend to me )
But i recommend for now you practice to make a good beat with perc and bass, mix that good, keep practicing and then work your way to synths and such. |
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