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energetic/melodic: "weBsley - Time Flies" [Demo]
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| websley |
Hello to all of you who bumped this thread,
I've been working on this track for quite a while now, so I wonder if it's finished enough. Perhaps you could help me out or give me some suggestions, if needed.
PLAY
DOWNLOAD {right click, save as!!!}
I used Cubase SX at this one, finishing it with ACID PRO 5 {Mainly for the SFX} Just listen or download, and tell me what you think.;)
-weBs |
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| Takkra |
Hi ive just finished listening yoursong... I really find the weBsley in this song too;) something typical..
*turns the song on again* nice drive with the percs too! bassline sounds a little wet to my opinion... I personally dont really like it that way.. nice synths @ 1;01.. 1:59 sounds rather relaxing.. for an energetic song:P.. changes alot @ 2:46 ;) nice work!! 4:40.. I like the breaks you always do.. just like in The Rats song.. sounded typical.. same filter maybe? 5:38 you can just feel "it"coming.. the pulsing :P you know ;).. kinda abrupt end.. but orignal ;)
all in all good production!!:thepirate |
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| websley |
Thanks Takkra,
I'm not really sure of what causes this song to have such an abrupt ending. Maybe I've to do some more editing there.
Anyone else? |
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| linkmage |
hats-to hard
kick-good
bass-some arpeggio maybe?
clap-good,but for these hats is'nt cool
cool track middsynths-to liquid
harmony- cool,but to frequent differnt function(sory ,but I'm not prof in English)
arrpegio in middle end-cool
Pad at end-very good
Snarerolls-could be longer
also you could put some loop or smthng
Had pleasure
Rating 7/10(good work,but can be better:cool: |
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| websley |
| quote: | Originally posted by linkmage
harmony- cool,but to frequent differnt function(sory ,but I'm not prof in English)
Snarerolls-could be longer
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I know what you mean by that:) I can only say that such harmony functions were the main reason for making this track.
Those snares indeed are a bit short, it's become a costum of me but I'll see if I can make longer rolls
thanks for your time;) |
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| wavydalker |
| Top class production m8, chunky and tight. Very progressive with really nice melodies. The first time i listened to it i thought it might need a little dubby sort of vocal now and then in the mix but after the second time i thought na.....it doesnt really. I can't really say nothing bad about this track. Its complex and keeps you interested from start to finish. :toocool: |
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| Desty Nova |
| I'm still feeling it.. |
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| websley |
Thanks you guys, maybe I'll burn it on a cd and take my getto blaster to the beach nearby:toothless:
Damn, the wheather's nice!:toocool: |
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| pho mo |
couldn't listen :( website said :
Je probeert deze file van een Tripod member pagina te downloaden: |
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| Takkra |
thats a true Hollandaise website :D
Meet the fcukers :D
| quote: | | Je probeert deze file van een Tripod member pagina te downloaden: |
your trying to download this file from a tripod memberpage.
maybe your page got expired weBs :S
well.. weve always got yousendit and soundclick :rolleyes: |
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| Desty Nova |
| quote: | Originally posted by websley
Thanks you guys, maybe I'll burn it on a cd and take my getto blaster to the beach nearby:toothless:
Damn, the wheather's nice!:toocool: |
that sounds lovely, the wheather here is a bit brisk, I would love to go the beach! |
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| websley |
| quote: | Originally posted by Takkra
thats a true Hollandaise website :D
Meet the fcukers :D
your trying to download this file from a tripod memberpage.
maybe your page got expired weBs :S
well.. weve always got yousendit and soundclick :rolleyes: |
It's fair enough to say you guys didn't read the "{right click + save as}" after the DOWNLOAD text. Of course Lycos doesn't support deep-linking:rolleyes: ;)
The only direct way to play it, is to press "PLAY", that is IF you've got IExplorer browser or if your browser supports mediaplayer plug-ins:D
| quote: | Originally posted by Desty Nova
that sounds lovely, the wheather here is a bit brisk, I would love to go the beach!
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Well, it's been about 33 degrees celcius today in the south of Holland. But I decided to skip today. I'm going tommorrow:D
Peace out,
-weBs |
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