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BIG ROOM TRANCE
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| IDarkISwordI |
Hey. Isnt working for me. Either SoundClick is having some of the usual afternoon issues or your upload wasnt successful. Gives me the error, 'error syncing to mpeg'.
Cheers,
Zac |
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| btm |
prob just soundclick being its usual dodgy self
i think its working now |
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| IDarkISwordI |
Hey. [working now]
-Good kick. Its a little rich in the upper frequencies but not too bad.
-I liek the dark pad. Gives a definant mood to the song from the start :).
-The trance gate coming in and out in the intro is an awesome additive. Perfect use of reverb on it.
-Good bassline, thick and heavy but not overly muddy. though a little quiet in comparison to your kick. They should be, audibly, equal volumes as a good rule of thumb.
-Good melody that comes in. Little muddy though, but for some reason, in a bit of a good way.
-The kick is definantly too loud :).
Overall, good song. It needs some tuning though :). The track is, as a whole, a bit too muddy, especially with the melody. Overuse of your reverb seems to have caused most of it but never-the-less, it is good and has some awesome potential.
Grade A
Cheers,
Zac |
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| btm |
Thanks for the feedback |Dark|Sword| , i will take these points into consideration.
The lead dfinately had a bit too much reverb on it but it has been sorted now. |
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| PutBoy |
| 'tis good ;D I like. Pretty much what, whatever his nick, said before. And one note in the melody sounds weird :S. Other than that, it's great, totally loved the intro too ;D |
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| Luke Terry |
pretty cool, most of the points of how to improve it have been covereed :)
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| thoughtlessjex |
There's a tribal sample in the mix somewhere. I can barely hear it, which is unfortunate, because when I do hear it, it sounds really cool. In fact, a lot of your sounds are way to soft.
I like your acid. A lot. :)
A lot of hiss and muddiness in the lead melody. I'm with DarkSword. cut back on the reverb a bit.
Both your intro and outro had really great ambiences. Those parts were very well done. |
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