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| tonkproject |
1 week and a few days..hope you like'it
tONKPROJECT - ME
a few words from TA members are welcome |
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| IDarkISwordI |
Hey.
-Awesome intro. I would recomend that the kick comes in almost randomly though.
-Awesome synth work at the beginning.
-The Bassline is awesome but quiet right now. Hoping that changes :).
-Very spacey type stuff.
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-I was hoping the song would keep its drive all through it though :). it got to be a spacey song and didnt go anywhere :(.
Overall, this sounds like it could be an awesome song. You seem to have made it much more minimal on the synths and beat than, in my opinion, it should be. The long note bassline in the beginning as well as the intro synths are a beautiful lead up to whats sounds like a will be MASSIVE MASSIVE tune but then it just kind of dies. I'd love to work with you on this tune and see you get on ASOT. Unfortunately, in its current state, I dont think thats possible but with some tweaking and some addedness to the synth, I think this could be aground breaker, and I'm being serious here. I review songs for a living and dont joke around about things like this. Please, please, make this into what it could be :). If you want some help on it, even if I'm not credited, drop me a line. ([email protected])
Cheers,
Zac |
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| tonkproject |
| thanx a lot for your reply...it is quite a lot to do on the song but my main problem is MY SOUND CARD.i was in the middle of the song at min 4 and i got stuck cause i cannot continue.my CPU cannot handle the rest of the song and i had to end'it for a while.after i will sell my bloody EMU and get the RME i have to stop working on it and call'it a song.there are a few themes that had to be added so i will probally go up to 7-8 min.the synth on the background will become the main synth after the second breack with a very nice theme...but until then....that'it.:sadgreen: |
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| IDarkISwordI |
Hey. That sucks man :(. What software do you use, host wise? We cant just let this song die like that. I'd be glad to atleast work on a remix of it if not collab with you. I mainly use FL Studio 5 but I have Reason 3 as well. A friend of mine also has Cubase SX3 and I'm hoping you dont use Cubase :P. Anyway, sorry for your misfortune man. Seriously, we cant let this song die.
Cheers,
Zac |
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| tonkproject |
| nope...will not die for sure...but probally in a week time my new soundcard will arive...so...i'll start working on that again,dont worry.i used Cubase for 2 years but now i'm 100% on Ableton. |
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| tonkproject |
| it seem that nothing change overhere....last time i post one of my tracks i got 0 feedback until i asked twice...somebody told me that you have to review somebody's track to get an review.it sounds like EUROVISION |
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| Massive84 |
Bass is indeed quiet.
EDIT; Nm about kick, it's fine
Nice dreamy synth, the pad is nice also.
damn really lush synth, great great (y)
i do think it lacks a choir or some spacy light pad to increase more atmosphere.
The small plucky melody is nice that comes in later.
Short but decent tune immo :), |
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| tonkproject |
| thanx...i use SONY MDR V700 probally it's to much bass on them ... |
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| Massive84 |
fiiiiiinish this track please.
the synth and melody are so awesome.
Or is it a short tune? |
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| tonkproject |
as i said ... the main problem is my sound card...i have big latency problems.next week i'll get the new one and finally by the end of the week i will have a nr1 :tongue2
cheers |
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