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Ibriza, Mellow&House Trance , Full Direct Download!
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| kopi_luwak |
Hi,
This is my latest track, this one is Mellow&House Trance, not my clasic chilled out stuff :P, so I think u can shake ur ass off with this ;). The name of the track is a word play in spanish, Brisa means Breeze, sort of like Ibreeze in english :D.
Feedback as always is very welcome :D.
TRACK NAME: Ibriza
UPDATE: New Bass added, Compressed the whole track and fixed some details with the drums.
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Kopi =o. |
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| IDarkISwordI |
Hey.
-Great chord at the beginning. Sounds mellotron like :).
-The percussion is decent. I think the surrounding percussion (taps and whatnot) could use a bit of a volume boost.
-The bassline is ok. Its a bit muted. Try adding some resonance into it so its more audible. You might also apply a chorus or something to expand the sound to be more fat. It just seems a bit dry right now.
-Good synth string. Its very well placed.
-Mmm :). The piano is great.
-The break is good here but the bassline seems to clash a little with some of the notes, especially around the 5m mark.
Overall, decent track. I'm always a sucker for songs that bring in a lot of Disco elements :). One thing you might also try, if thats what you were truely going for, is a bass guitar vst like reFX Slayer 2 or if you are using FLStudio, the BooBass plugin is a very nice bass emulator. This would give it a much more disco feel and personly, a better sound in my opinion :). Good mellow song.
Grade A
Cheers,
Zac |
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| kopi_luwak |
Thanks mate, true about the bass clashing, Ii think i forgot to deleted another bass pattern and that's why sometimes clashes, also gonna boost a bit more the bass :=.
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| fake_illusion |
| Very chilled, I like the style... Things you might wanna add: some more variation in the percussion when the track progresses. Around 4:00 I have the feeling the bass is not fitting in. And as said above, the bassline is a bit muted. For the rest more than decent! :) |
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| Massive84 |
mastering could be better.
2.19 dont like that progression of the bass.
everything sounds nice, but the mix sounds so hibernating. compress, mix it a bit harder etc.
Piano is really nice, i also like the rhodes :) ,
nice small fx used :)
I grade it 7/10.
can be better :) |
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| Sunclyder |
Hi Kopi:)
You must change bassline, becouse not adjust in this style!!
Pads are simply, piano melody is fine, we are by-the-way melodys??
Overall not bad!!
Greetings |
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| Takkra |
Yo kopi my man :D
isn't yousendit great :eyespop: lo..
just listening.. really good chill tune,
something you'd want on the radio when your relaxing on the beach ;)!
just take a look @ the bassline.. its the only thing that would need some attention, and maybe make the shakers a bit more clear.. th clap is really good ;)!
overall: lovely :D |
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| kopi_luwak |
Thanks to all for ur feedback :D.
I fixed the bass, added a new one, actually two basses layereds, compressed the whole , and fixed some other details, thanks in advance!
Kopi =o. |
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| RiCo |
| Dude, this song kicks ass...reminds me a bit of Janeiro, hehe. Only thing I REALLY dislike is that bassline...sounds too open...can you close the cut-off a wee bit and lower the decay a little so it's more stabby and tight? Everything else I'm not even gonna complain...the track is nice as heck! :) |
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| kopi_luwak |
Hey man very thanks for the feedback, I am having a real bad moment fixing the bass line :(, I will be awake whole night trying diferent styles of bass :D.
Kopi =o. |
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