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(TRANCE) Goddess - Live To Die 192Kbps 6:12 Full Track
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| ZzZ The Goddess |
Ok, if anyone remembers where I was going with this track it has completely changes after putting 2 more days work into it. Let me know how you think it sounds now and what else it needs changes/comments welcome and apprectiated.
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Thanks
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Changed the bass added some more effects - here is the new link (sound any better)
Goddess - Live to Die Edit 3
Genre: Trance
Time: 6:12
Quality: 192Kbps |
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| PDM |
Well, you forgot something really important.
The bass... |
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| Kthought |
The Ambience is Incredible.
The drums sound like tribal house gone wrong. I suggest a harder, more prominent kick, and of course a bassline of some sort.
Love the melodies and ambience though, try filtering out your background synths for builds and lulls. |
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| Luke Terry |
this is sounding much improved :)
the percs are ok, just a bit light. there needs to be a bass presence otherwise the track will lack substance.
everything has it's own place in the mix and sounds are not competing which is a really good thing which many producers struggle to do.
the rapid improvement you have made is really impressive, keep up the good work :)
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| ZzZ The Goddess |
| There is a bass in the song. When i changed it I turned it down because i thought it was too loud so now I guess its too low. I will turn it back up and update :) |
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| kopi_luwak |
Hey,
Listening .... I will avoid any mastering comments cuze I am using my Pc speakers :). Drums sounds nice, nice Pads/Piano, u have a really good athmosphere here since the begin. This could be a very cool progressive tracks working out the build up for that, all the elements are well place, and all the layers are interacting well with each other :).
In overall, very cool track, if you would work more the build up into a progressive track this would kick ass, keep it up ;).
Kopi =o. |
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| Xenocreator_PG_ |
| quote: | Originally posted by ZzZ The Goddess
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Hey mate :p
-The pads are great & create a sweet breezy atmosphere.
-The hihats are piercing!! :o
-The ping-ponging bongos are ok & give a good spacial effect to the song.
2.33 I love the pads that enter at this point. I would have love to hear them go on for longer (& maybe build up with dual layering).
This track is pretty much the same all the way through without much progression. I enjoyed this style you have created, as it has all the elements to sustain it, though I feel that a couple more layers need to be added to build it up some more. This track does grow on me the more I listen to it; I can see it being a theme to sci-fi movie for some reason... Every sound flows well together.
Anyway, great job on this one Goddess. :p
Xeno. |
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| ZzZ The Goddess |
I threw some heavier bass in and added some extra effects. I am probably going to work on some layering next but this is the update I have for now. Let me know if it sounds good or suggestions on how to make it sound clearer and crisper. :)
Goddess - Live to Die (edit 2) |
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| thoughtlessjex |
I think I hear unwanted distortion of some kind on your kick.
The bongos seem kinda weird, although they don't detract too much.
Now I definitely hear distortion. Do something about that, man.
Once I get into the track, the bongos actually add to the atmosphere. I'd say add the bongos when there's an atmosphere for them to compliment.
You still need a bassline. Something to fill the song out a bit more in the low end. |
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| ZzZ The Goddess |
| quote: | Originally posted by thoughtlessjex
I think I hear unwanted distortion of some kind on your kick.
The bongos seem kinda weird, although they don't detract too much.
Now I definitely hear distortion. Do something about that, man.
Once I get into the track, the bongos actually add to the atmosphere. I'd say add the bongos when there's an atmosphere for them to compliment.
You still need a bassline. Something to fill the song out a bit more in the low end. |
The unwanted distortion was when I added the bass, it not the kick if you listen to the previous edit of the song. No one can hear the actual bass? :conf: well I guess I have to fix the bass again. Any tips on how I can get a nice bouncy bass without all that distortion. I turned the bass up mainly because no one was able to hear it. |
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| kopi_luwak |
I have the same problem, btw u have improved a lot, I remember listening to ur first track on here and I could say u are another Producer :).
Kopi =o. |
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