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| mavve |
Hi lets start whit telling folks im new to this place.
now to my latset track. I havent been in the trance scene for some while. but this is my latest un mastered track.
Download Elements of trance @ http://www.dance-industries.com/vie...2564&track=9831
I would love to hear your feedback on this one.
Tnx for spending your time /MVZ |
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| Desty Nova |
Wow thats a really sweet track you've got there, very uplifting hard trance. I'm liking the angelic vocals a lot, it creates a nice soundscape. thx for posting it, I hope to hear more.
-Alex |
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| mavve |
| Tnx ill post the last version whene done =) |
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| soundrush |
hey mavve. the intro is great, very old fashioned but good melody. i realy like the melody all over the track but somehow it sounds a little bit weird in some places (0.45 till 1.40). i would appreciate some advance after the break. you just added a plain string, there needs to be more to keep it interesting imo. the kick needs more high frequencies, its to dull. i would exchange the snare with a a clap but thats a matter of tase i guess. you can get much more out of this track if you master this track.
cheers, niklas.
hey kane, why dont you write this to your signature? actualy promoting your music would be lot easyer then. |
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| dj_kane |
| i did post it in my own thread but because im new on this know one replied. |
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| mavve |
Well Tnx for the great feedback , Mastering isnt my strong side =)
i will make it advance after the break, but im considering some vocals
as an advance. to sing the melody what do you think about that? ill add some higher Freq on kicks and try to add both claps and snares =)
but i didnt find any glitches in the melody . ill make it clearer =)
the guy how masters my tunes isnt in sweden so i cant master it. if any one have som time . feel free to try =)
Dj_kane i tried to listen to your song but i couldnt make it work
hehe yes Its cheesy, but i was inspired by Oceanlab�s satelite and
Whiteroom Vs. The Cranberries - The Shattered Whiteroom :happy2: |
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