| mark_the_gooner |
The intro sounds quite techno-ish, sounds too plain/empty (kick+hat+clap), needs more percussion (cymbal loop? another hat?).
Bassline is alrite but the track is still very empty sounding.
The synths are deep, sounds good.
The intro goes on for too long, add more sounds to make it more interesting.
Breakdown is ok, but it stretches on a bit, try not to stick to a 4 or 8 bar rule especially in breakdowns.
Up to 4:30, sounds good but there is alot missing in the track, wouldn't do it for clubbers (unless this isn't aimed to be club music?).
5:50, Song is quite repetitive, u definetly need more elements.
This song would be alrite if i was playing a football manager game or something, just for easy listening. |
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