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Joey vs Ricky -- The Ocean [128, 4 min sample]
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| JoeyEnv |
Ricky gave me a melody and voila, what i've managed to come up with so far. It's only a build and a break's worth so it's not finished yet. The title sounds cheesy as so any suggestions (mainly looking at Ricky since it's his melody) would be appreciated.
Cheers, Joey.
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The Ocean - 128 - 4.43 - Uplifting Trance
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| RickyM |
Hey joeey man
Sounds cool as .
About the name for the song - I'm pretty awful when it comes to chooosing names, but I'll have a think :D. |
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| Jay M |
Hm.. it seems as if there's some latency on the synths, like they're just a few ms. late. Clap is ugly m8. Yeah there's a lot to be done cause the synths are a big blur. IMO you didn't have to post it this stadium.
Anyways.. now I'm inspirationless for a title, maybe work the track out first...
:rolleyes: |
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| Desty Nova |
I like your track very much. The intro is kind of long but the wait is worth while for some nice synths, imo.
-Alex |
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| alexpea |
Inro is very boring. Even though you're trying to make it DJ-friendly, try to make it interresting as well :)
At 1.20 you should have introduced a new element.. Hmm... Percs stopped around 2.20... Unnescescary (did I spell it right, hehe) break, imo. Doesn't bring anything new to the track. There's supposed to come a melody after 4.30 I hear... But that's way too long buildup imo. Good try guys, but it didn't impress me though :rolleyes: You tried to make an epic, energic trancer with lots of power, but you failed. Because I felt it was kinda flat, lifeless and boring. Sorry if I'm harsh... I'm just trying to be honest :thepirate
Keep it up - I know both of you can do better than this!!! |
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| JoeyEnv |
^Alex man, thats how I want you to review all my tunes. ing hell, just let it out. Awesome. :)
Now excuse me while I go jump off London bridge.
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Respect to everyone else as well. I love you all. |
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| [-dp-Sensuerea] |
Listening to it...
0:01 - decent kick...
0:27 - nice acid sound, altough its little too loud
0:40 - poor clap, its dry... put some delay & reverb and increase the volume ;)
0:54 - dont like the OH, its too loud
2:00 - the incoming synth is 'blurred' and sounds muddy
Overall:
- poor percs
- sounds flat and muddy
- nice FX
I think a melody form RickyM deserves a better treatment :rolleyes: |
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