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New here, can anyone give feedback on our new song?
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| DJ Creator |
Hello !
this is my first post over here... I am a producer from Holland and I produce together with my little brother. We have a new song which is uploaded at http://www.arjanjansen.tmfweb.nl/djcreator it is called "where are you now?"
We are looking for feedback on this one, so please have a listen to this. It is a rather 'slow' song, if you want to hear some more energetic stuff, listen to "epic proportions" or other songs at http://www.mp3.com/mindsensation
hope to hear from you,
DJC |
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| JOELIVELY |
thats a good melody, drums after it were a bit slow coming in, rather than introduce a hi-hat on its own, bring in a shaker to cover with it, or a shaker on its own. the hi-hat thing sounds a bit too basic and doesnt complement it, bit repetative too as I am listening to it, soft synths are coming in, with a nice "bee-like" sound, which just kicked in, very nice with synth strings in back, now main synth, nice..... beat is brought well in, hope it aint a basic hi hat coming in... needs a long drum + crash roll rather than just bring in the Hi Hat, then pause it, then full on! its a very nice track so far, but it needs a bit of sampling. any chance of making that synth string in the background harder and louder? so you got that... then a gap, then the really hard string, then back to the soft with the hard main synth? its good stuff all in all, but that Hi hat sounds a bit "tinie".
can I do a remix? |
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| DJ Creator |
thanx for your reply... you can do a remix if you want, but you have to wait for a while.. this was just a preview, so I will change it a little bit.. thereafter I get some vocals to complete this song.. don't know how long it will take...
cheers! |
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| JOELIVELY |
| no probs m8, its a good track with potential, just take ur time and it will come out right :) |
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