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Amurai - Thought Crime <preview>
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| Manvel |
Hi guys,
back with another preview :). This one's called "Thought Crime" and I just started it like 1 hr ago. SO i'd really appreciate some feedback so I can make it the most coolest track ever hehe...
---UPDATE June 26 ---
added new clip with a new melody and lead...dunno bout the lead. I'll have to put a stronger lead synth for the climax. tell me what you think.
LINK - http://s27.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3EMCH5A15I4V420TFF1Y39OM73
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I'll keep you updated as the song progresses
Thanks,
Manvel |
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| 1mason11 |
| great as always.sure to become a bomb!:D |
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| Digital Aura |
WOW! Nice kick sound! And I'm a sucker for that synth sound!
Yeah...this is gonna be CHOON for sure Manvel!
I see why your so pumped after only an hour into it! LOL
Love that amped guitar sound you've got flanging around in there...you're gonna drop that on us later hard aren't you!? I can feel it! :cool: |
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| Manvel |
hehe being drunk? lol...about that distorted lead...how'd u know lol ;)
manvel |
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| ronk |
sounds very nice, I love the bassline.
the climax...eh..you need to work on that :) sounds empty. maybe try to add that arped synth.. |
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| Axolotyl |
Excellent work. The delay on that synth is just magic.
The break is pretty weak imho... you could wind up the tension a lot harder! Then again, my tastes arnt very subtle ;) |
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