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[Trance/Techtrance] Jay Rico - Word My Marks
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| VictorCharlie |
Yo,
I finished a track in a bunch of hours, and I'm anxious how you people think about it.
Especially Pjotr if he sees this :D
Here's the link :
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Thanks in advance |
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| DjMorpheus |
Review while listening:
- Open hihat on 30 sec is very, very lofi.
- Reverb crash is also lofi
- nice conga's/bongo's
- On 1:30 there seems like another track, transition is to strong.
- Break: don't like the sound, sounds like a preset and a little cheap.
Sorry man, I don't like it.
Try to create better quality samples. Also work on the arrangments and transitions. Listen to pro-tracks, copy techniques (I don't say SOUNDS, that's another discussion) and learn from it.
This track could use some improvements, keep trying and posting.
I don't want to sound negative at all, just want to give you feedback that you can work on it, k? |
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