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[130 bpm trance] Yarune - Sync Master (Raw Instrumental) - Full 192 kbps (pg. 2)
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| davidemonin |
Hey jay
Nice tune. Like Gerry said, improvement in eq/mastering would make it sound really good. The other thing that i think could improve, is the kick, sounds to "BAOM/bouncy" ,hehe if that makes any sense.U have a nice bassline, so having that style of kick and bassline just makes it too much imo. Tighten that kick somewhat. Contact me if you make changes/improvements on this one:) |
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| Jay M |
Thanks guys.
David I understand your point, I think it's a good idea to just make the kick less booming, if that's what you mean. I have a nice idea with vocals in it, but it'll take some time before they're added. Once it's done I'll let you know.
Anyone else? :) |
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| thoughtlessjex |
| I couldn't find any complaints myself. Very nice track. I liked the guitar-like sounds. |
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| J.L. |
very enticing production... bass is thick and lush... guitar sounding really nice
however... in my honest opinion...
- lose the really high frequency sound that is on right at the beginning and various parts of the track
- and also that mid bass sounding thing that starts at 0:32 i didn't think it just fit the track at all
everything else sounds great... the compliment of melodies work well |
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| Jay M |
| Hi J.L. Thanks for the pointers, I'll have a look at those! |
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| Sparkunian |
Hi mate!
Oh!Very goog job!
Bass is excellent;) Sequencer synths very nice;) I love the main melodie of guitar as it is.Is very relaxing and melodic;)The synth also at 3:00 is beutifull.Something like oriental. Generally the track is a very very nice chill out project.My only complain is for the openhihat or something like this that distort a lot.
Congratulations :) |
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| Nomen Nescio |
Hey mate,
Just listened to the track and first compliment is :
Great beginning of the track! from the first drumbeat you catch my attention.
Bass is a bit too heavy, and I do not even have big speakers.
Lovely guitarish riff during the build up, percussions are good. For some reason however the mastering is not up to par. Some sounds really sing around if you know what I mean. They tend to almost distort.
The main melody is a bit weak, you could work on that. The guitarish riff promised a great track but this main melody does not live up to the expectations. ahh the guitar is back :)
Hmzz overall the track is not as good as the beginning made it sound. It just flows a long nicely but not really a track that will be in my head after this first listen. Although all the elements are good: percussion is great, lovely driving bass, good build up. Just the main melody that is too weak and simple.
Overall a 7 out of 10:)
Cheers!
Nomen Nescio |
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| Jay M |
@ Sparkunian: Cheers!
@ Nomen Nescio: Cheers! I'll try to improve it melody-wise with the vocals.
:) |
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| Drik |
Cool track.
Lots of evolving sounds and a nice melody.
Only thing that bothered me is that the bassline is a little too wide and makes things a tad muddy. A more simple shorter bassline centered in the middle would do the trick I'd reckon. And yep, vox would help out a lot :)
Nice work! |
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| DanB |
sounds mint, the guitar gets a bit boring imo. part from that, it's mint
- luke terry |
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| Jay M |
| quote: | Originally posted by DanB
sounds mint, the guitar gets a bit boring imo. part from that, it's mint
- luke terry |
Hehe Luke, is that you? :)
Cheers guys for commenting. |
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