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new tune - Uplifting/Melodic trance
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| ichiro |
Hi feedback welcome.
---Wayward ---
thx 4 listening :)
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| Digital Aura |
Sounds like Airwave at first! Then the vox ... hahaha quite silly sounding.:eek:
The track is well mixed and sounds very good. The break is sweet, the lead synth cuts a little harsh maybe...maybe not. Depends on whether the pad is accompanying it. The vocals just don't sound good to me... are you sure thats a female? :D
Nice start anyways! |
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| ichiro |
thx, so you think this track has potential?
i think i'll bin those vocals, I chucked them in for the sake of it, and Im not sure they do much for it.
I had a listen yto your latest tune 'one thing' I like it alot. Its got a nice groove and builds well. I like the vocal sample at beginning.
c u around! |
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| Digital Aura |
Thanks.
The vocals might not be so bad if you had some more...that line just by itself just seems outta place...you got more!? throw it in...and maybe you can even build the song better with more vocals. It does need to have some more variation and maybe some more progression, but otherwise I totally feel you can make this one worthwhile with a few more days on it! ;) |
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