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[Darktrance] Takkra - Trackerball ( FINAL )
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| Takkra |
Ok people, after annoying you with every inch of progress I made with the track here finally is the FINAL buildup.
I put alot of work in this one, therefore a review would be very much appreciated.
And just for the fun here's also the first version I started with 4,5 months ago,
so you can compare and laugh at me:rolleyes:.
genre: Trance/ TechTrance
duration: 4:00
bitrate: 256 kb/s
Original:
[ usendit ]
FINAL:
[ usendit ]
Thnx ;) |
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| kopi_luwak |
Listening ... Wow u have been improved urself since ur last track :toothless , the voice for the intro is very cool, I like ur Bass also. I think u could open more ur supwersaws, but that's just my personal taste :), Kick is sweet, I like those rolls and filters on it :D.
In overall, this sounds pretty cool man! I just would add more effects to the voice and would add some congas, other than that is a very good work ;).
Kopi =o. |
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| linkmage |
hello tak...at fisrt look.....-where is your high freqs(I understand this style,but I think you van put some high freqs synth noise...or tetracord lead...,because scale need be fulllier(sorry for language...nice atmosphere...kick is"nt annoying...)...you put part in middle...because now your tune is like portrait without face....some abstract-Idea work would be excellent.....Nice tune Tak...but you van better...and always remember Mastering 60%,40% tune...AND 300% is Idea.....keep going....! ! ! ! !
- Idea
+ mastering
+ tune(paint)
+ style
- scale
overall---not bad,but you can better.....:cool: |
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| Takkra |
thanks everyone for your quick reply's :D
Ill see what I can do with the high freqs| quote: | | Linkmage: "because now your tune is like portrait without face" |
nice description :p
I guess this isnt the final version then, lets go back to fruity :p! |
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| Axolotyl |
Sweet, nice tunage. Lots of original ideas in here. Very interesting stuff. Mastering is spot on too.
Thanks for sharing the early version aswell. The kick sounds so piss weak... lol... |
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| Takkra |
| quote: | Originally posted by Axolotyl
The kick sounds so piss weak... lol... |
Do you mean for the old or the new version :p ? I hope you mean the old one :rolleyes: :p
And thanks for your review :D im glad to hear everyone likes the idea:) |
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| Sparkunian |
Intro is beautiful.Nice vocs;)
Very cool work on bass.I like all the changes and the filters that you use on it.For me it's one of the strongest part of this track;)
Drum programing is nice too.I love the way you use the the compressor for some kikcs.It's sound very 'Scasi'.Another good point pal ;)
Synth of the main melodie is good and phat.It gives a techy atmosphere.
I like also all the backrounds sequencers and the way you work on hihats.
Very cool work mate ;)
Keep it up! |
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| Axolotyl |
| quote: | Originally posted by Takkra
Do you mean for the old or the new version :p ? I hope you mean the old one :rolleyes: :p
And thanks for your review :D im glad to hear everyone likes the idea:) |
Yeah on the old one. The final one is sweet. |
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| Darkness_Hero |
| good job d(-_-)b |
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