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substorm - first sunset (prev sample)
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| Chronosis |
| These should be in the promotion forum. Anyways, I can't comment now cause I'm making a tape. |
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| Project 7 |
| Melody sounds very familar ;) |
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| flamingopikken |
Really nice melo and lead mate! Really gives me the feeling of a sunset, so you might say the contents of the track fits nicely with the title :)
I think you need to do something about the bass and kick, they're too un-recognizable. The kick is too "boring" too. Try to add a ride on it. |
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| substorm |
| quote: | Originally posted by Project 7
Melody sounds very familar ;) |
Yepp... does´n it..
:D and yor right... thats where i got the idéa.. |
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| DJ_RoKo |
i'd agree with that,
sikk lead and nice riff, but as flamingopikken sed u cant hear much else and its a lil bit boring. got anutha sample for us?
peace out broe |
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| substorm |
| quote: | Originally posted by flamingopikken
Really nice melo and lead mate! Really gives me the feeling of a sunset, so you might say the contents of the track fits nicely with the title :)
I think you need to do something about the bass and kick, they're too un-recognizable. The kick is too "boring" too. Try to add a ride on it. |
Thank for the feed back! :) and i agree on the bass and kick... and the onther drums are coming :happy2: |
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| Corteoz |
This is not the promotion forum.
Anyways, the melody is cliché! I could've sworn I've heard it a million times before.
The melody also seems quite random. There is no idea or meaning. It's just many random arpeggiated notes.
I suggest you redo the melody. It needs a better theme and MORE VARIATION! 2:18 minute with EXACTLY the same pattern is more than boring. It makes you wanna slap the artist silly. |
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| substorm |
| quote: | Originally posted by Corteoz
This is not the promotion forum.
Anyways, the melody is cliché! I could've sworn I've heard it a million times before.
The melody also seems quite random. There is no idea or meaning. It's just many random arpeggiated notes.
I suggest you redo the melody. It needs a better theme and MORE VARIATION! 2:18 minute with EXACTLY the same pattern is more than boring. It makes you wanna slap the artist silly. |
I understand that u think that... but as i said before.. that this is only a sample... its just a 3 track sample... ive just start working on it... but anyway thank for the feedback.. all critisism is good :) |
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| hardikaveri |
| lead is really good but pay attention to drums and bassline!! |
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| Icone |
Please put this in the music production forum, people aren't exactly looking for these sort of things here...
// Wim |
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| substorm |
| quote: | Originally posted by Icone
Please put this in the music production forum, people aren't exactly looking for these sort of things here...
// Wim |
I know.. my mistake... sorry if it inconvinience for you! peace :cool: |
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