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Tyrome - The Underground (Clockwise Remix)[Full 192k]
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Hello folks, I'm working on several remixes at the moment, but this one is almost finished so I'm glad to present it ;)
This track is made with sonar rewired with reason.
Synths used are 1x FM7, 3x SubTractors, 2 PlasticZ VSTs, 1 PRO-53, 1 reaktor & 1 atmosphere module.
I've also ripped the vocal from the original track and added some effects on it to eliminate the music. I'm still looking for a better bassline, but this one will do for the moment..
I'm learning a lot of 'needfull thingz' on this forum so I hope the quality of my tracks is improving :D
Hope you like it..
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| PDM |
Hey mate,
Weird intro but cool.
Kick needs compression sounds... muddy or clippy can't explain the effect but is not good.
The effect you put onto the vocal, really nice!!
I like the funky bass.
That crash needs to be eq'd down on the high frequencies, too bright.
Same for the thin melody coming at around 3:29, too bright for my taste.
The overall sound is muddied by the kick, you need to fix that mainly, and some parts of the track sounds too bright, eq down the hf or high freq, Limit it.
Melody wise, man, fixing a couple of issues this track would be really cool, so original, so funky, I like it, and every track must have some 16 notes of beats only either in the beginning or in the end to make it dj friendly, so in this case, try adding an outtro to your track.
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| shattered~soul |
| I like the funky feeling you gave this track :) |
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Thnx for the comments, I've changed the intro & out and lighty modified the bass so I hope it sounds less 'muddy'..
The updated track is on the same link as above :) |
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