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[Progressive Dark Trance] "Iodine V2" [192kb/s, 6:02, entire track]
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| Takkra |
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Hey guys ;) Here's a new track Ive been working on for a whole rainy day :p.. I started early and ended around 1:00 I had to do it quietly because my parents were going nuts hearing the melody over and over again :p So, the mastering will not be done so perfectly maybe its a bit quiet so just turn up the speakers ;)!!
Made with: Fruity & ACID
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Any feedback will be very much appreciated :) |
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| linkmage |
Hwy tak...nice too see ya here again...:)
percs---my style :) fantastic :),nice synth loop from 0:27,nice bongo ghosts :) nice lead.... :D,but at the end(of lead every time),melody is going not to the needed side of piano roll :)
1. very atmospheric track
2. my foot is similar to kick
3. I think if some changes,couyld be nice narcotic club track :)
4. 9,5/10,need little work...
GREAT
comment my new track
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forum/s...threadid=279436 |
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| linkmage |
| I listened that 10 times :)...... |
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| kopi_luwak |
U are improvinr urself a lot man! This sounds way better than the rest of ur work :D.
Keep it up man ;):
Kopi =o. |
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| eulerfx |
- seems a bit empty and lacking energy in the beginning. imo your synths are kind of thin
- i like the groovy melody that comes in, but i think it could be put to better use with more tension creating sfx and improved song structure
- also, it would be nice to hear some other elements added on top just to develop atmosphere
- everything seems like a prelude to something. you should try adding a part where all the elements come together. start by adding a prominent 4x4 hat an snare. |
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| Takkra |
Thanks everyone for your reviews ;)
Ive taken every bit of advice in the "final?" version
so, there have been small changes in total, but it's not a totally new track.
check it out:
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So what do you guys think? ;) |
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| linkmage |
jes... :) hello :)
At first in my eyes lighted,that your vocal and your vanguard gated arp freqs is bad...because need medium freqs.........kick could be more powerful(tip-dublicate the kick,and do only high freqs)..melody is smashing up...that is awesome :D... idea 10/10
mastering hmmm... maybe 7,5/10
tune has awesome potentiality....nice work...please write me to MSN messenger if you can([email protected])...nice work...
keep that |
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| david.michael |
| The entire song sounds like one long intro to me. Melody is very odd. Vocals are annoying. Interesting idea but just not my cup. |
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| Desty Nova |
I like your track very much, I enjoy the minimal callousness and steady flow, this will make an excellent mixing track, in my opinion.
-Alex |
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| Axolotyl |
Nice tunage!
This is like techno though...?! Not really what I'd call dark prog. But anyway, its got a pretty nasty feel to it. Loving the echoing on the hihats and the lead is way cool although I'm not really a fan of those cold techno melodies.
FX at 2.15 is off a bit. Doesnt sit too well in the mix.
Mastering is quite solid but it feels a little flat in the highs. But maybe its that dirty techno feeling your going for ;) Good stereo spacing though. That lead is sitting well above the rest of the track.
Good, growly techno =) |
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