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[progtrance] Moontour 192 - 7:07
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| Takkra |
Here's a little something ive worked on with mixed emotions;)
tell me what you guys think about the song.
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thanks in advance :) |
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| linkmage |
Hi takk,
Very cool bongo drums :):crazy:
CooL harmony...:)
bongo need mid freqs....
and song need more middle freqs
about Idea-trance,trance,trance...need your darker side... :)
I liked your job...:) 9/10
please comment my new track
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forum/s...threadid=279860 |
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| kopi_luwak |
Hey man,
I would try to make more notorious those strings, they give a really nice Aura to the track, this made me remember some Jean Michel Jarre work in his great Chronology Album :). You have some really nice ideas on this one, I think an uplifting evrsion would be really cool.
In overall, this is going really good, you are becoming more musical :D, keep it up ;).
Kopi =o. |
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| eulerfx |
- that melody sounds nice, very melancholy. reminds me of something...must be a similar harmony
- nice use of automation/lfo
- the track seems to be building and building, but doesn't get anywhere. the melody sounds like a prelude to something, but again doesn't get anywhere
- breakdown sounds good, but there is not enough melodic buildup for he coming kick, and then after it comes, there is not enough drive
- overall, you have a solid track coming here, but you should give it a few listens and try to see wher you want it to have tension and where you want it to have drive... |
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| Takkra |
thanks everyone for your reviews :D
| quote: | | Kopi: "In overall, this is going really good, you are becoming more musical" |
thanks man ;) its nice to hear that, youve been a great help too !!
and you three thanks for helping me out everytime I post hear ;)! you really give usefull advice :)!!
update wíll be here soon ;)!! |
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| Takkra |
here's the friggin update hoohah. w'th McDrive. I can fly. :crazy: :crazy:
Sit back, play, and review;).
:rolleyes:
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| richg101 |
hey takkra.
listening now.
really nice minimal sounding track that plods along nicely. lovely drums and beats. especially the unexpected reversed kick.
the bassline is dark and the pads follow it in a lush way.
melody is nice but id love to hear it in a lower octave.
i recon it would sit in the mix better if it was lower and make it even more dark.. maybe?
also i think the track would benefit from having a more minimal start. thus saving the deep dark bassline etc for the main part. and allowing an easier mix into it:)
overall i would have this in my box and would probably use it as the first track to a mix.
really deep tune.
rich:) |
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| kopi_luwak |
Hey man I like alot the Toms, try to make the paned shakers less eat piercing, I would put some highs on them down :).
I would try to add more variation later to the track, it runs making the same cool melodie again and again :P.
Is going greta man :).
Kopi =o. |
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| david.michael |
Very nice track here... nice update... not sure what I think about that new high-pitched melody though, can't decide if I like it or not. Agree with the user above, might be interesting hearing it an octave lower.
Nice pads and atmosphere! I also like the reverse kick.
Good song! |
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