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E:mortal-Days Like These feat. Vicky Fee
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| Drik |
I've renamed the "released [dreamer mix] to Days Like These, added vocals to the track now and done some cleaning to the track and structure.
For those of you who haven't listened before, its a sad tinged emotional trance tune. I normally have this thing of having several parts to a track where it shapeshifts into two similar melodies and I've done that here as well.
Let me know what you think of it
Link: http://www.emortal.se/music/emortal-days_like_these.mp3 |
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| Jay M |
| Bass on its own sounds a bit awkward. Atmosphere with the arp thingy and piano is good, pads are ok too. Vocals are pretty hard to build a track around.. they stand a bit apart from the mix. And I'd add a percussion layer. Buildup is pleasant. Pretty nice track overall. Nice work. |
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| Drik |
Hmm.. You mean like percussion after the first break?
Guess I could have some bongo rythm or something :)
Maybe I should do a smoother intro of the bass, fadein. |
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| Jay M |
| quote: | Originally posted by Drik
Hmm.. You mean like percussion after the first break?
Guess I could have some bongo rythm or something :)
Maybe I should do a smoother intro of the bass, fadein. |
Yep yep yep. :) |
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| Drik |
Thanks Jay!
Good feedback.
I did the changes and I'm not regretting it :)
I've updated the link above. |
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