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Sightings - uplifting trance
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| mark_the_gooner |
This is my july song, its uplifting trance (aka dead trance :tongue3).
Sorry that it doesn't really live up to its name but if you can think of a better one, please tell me :).
All feedback welcome.
Take your pickings:
Full 128kbps Link -save target as..
Sample 128kbps Link -save target as..
SoundClick Link Full (Various kbps)
edit: i fixed the sample url.
edit2: ok YouSendIt hasn't worked for the 2nd time, so i assume something is wrong on there side, though the other URLs are fine. |
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| kopi_luwak |
Man, check out ur links, I tried the sample one, send edit and both are not availables :(.
Listening at soundclick, the intro is too generic imo, I would work more with the drums, they sound pretty flat, the clap/hats above all and the conga loop into the background that is really hard to notice :D.
In overall, not bad at all, sounds a bit basic imo, also I wouold care more about the drums, I would make them less flat, good work man keep it u ;).
Kopi =o. |
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| Klangzentrum |
hey, mark!
some more atmosphere in the intro would be cool! add a low pad or something...
that small melody is cool!
the cowbell (or whatever) is getting on my nerves... :toothless try another pattern...but this stupid tick tick tick tick tick tick tick tick and so on doesnt sound very good... ;) hope you know which one i mean! :D
the cuttof fade out of the bass before the break should be done complete...it ends immediately while fading out...
i like the latin-american feeling in the mainpart! ;)
you should add some more elements to make it sound more full! pads and such are always helpful...maybe some more percs...
the kick could use some compression to make it more noticable...
everything sounds very negative, but i guess it helps to improve!
the track itself could turn out really great with some more work on it!
keep it up!
// Lars |
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