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| RescueComputer |
Rescue Computer- Flax
(Mp3 Stream 192Kb/s, 3:37)
Click that for a stream for the newest song by Rescue Computer, Flax. I hope you guys like it, please criticise. I need to improve. |
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| jacheatamobits |
i liked the melody and the bass line, lots of energy.
what it needs IMO:
a better sounding synth for the lead.its a little too piercing to your ears
a build up, a breakdown, some better percs, and different arrangement of the composition as a whole.
synergy |
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| RescueComputer |
| quote: | Originally posted by jacheatamobits
i liked the melody and the bass line, lots of energy.
what it needs IMO:
a better sounding synth for the lead.its a little too piercing to your ears
a build up, a breakdown, some better percs, and different arrangement of the composition as a whole.
synergy |
I thought I was having form problems, I just needed someone to tell me. Thanks alot. I love you. |
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| RescueComputer |
| I really liked the patch for the riff though.. |
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| sevenseas |
| quote: | Originally posted by jacheatamobits
i liked the melody and the bass line, lots of energy.
what it needs IMO:
a better sounding synth for the lead.its a little too piercing to your ears
a build up, a breakdown, some better percs, and different arrangement of the composition as a whole.
synergy |
I totally agree with synergy, it needs alot work. The lead synth isn't really a pleasure to hear. Too less percussion and the percussion you have, I hardly noticed it. It's clipping a bit too but it could just be my mediaplayer. But all and all, the idea is nice... And thnxz for reviewing my tune:) |
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| RescueComputer |
| Hmm, i see. Thank you for commenting. |
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