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Goldenscan - halcyon( Danny c astral mix) my entry to comp
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| dannyc |
hi guys here is my entry to the armada competition. i persume i didnt win since i recieved no email from the guys, but i'm pretty proud of my effort.
anyway here is the full 192 version for anyone who might be interested in playing it out.
p.s. i made this a while ago so i've improved since but its still one of the best things i've done imo. ;)
all feedback appreciated as always.
heres the link:
http://www.dance-industries.com/view_track.php?ID=10569 |
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| DjKharmat |
Melodies very good, your synths and sounds are really nice though, really a pleasant track to listen to.
You would have to improve in the rendering final, in some points the synth it goes in distortion and it does not appeal to the clap to me used.
Not bad test to arrange it.
HI! ;) |
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| d-miurge |
I agree on the clap. Try to fix the rythm and it will be ok. You progress since the last time mate! As I said you before, you're on the right way!
Your kick sounds great, good effort on it (and I know how it's difficult to have a good kick).
Some of your synths still need a better 'pro-work', but I'm sure you'll make it yourself in a few weeks! ;) |
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| Aquarian |
| I love the windy effects in the background. Instruments sound pretty good. Great track |
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| Jay M |
Starting strings are too sharp imo and thin. Nice effects in it, but the lfo thingy is just too loud. Clipping here and there, you should check the levels mate! Some leads are really not my taste, so sharp and loud, caught myself lowering the volume here. Break now. Vocals are ok, I think you pitched them up just too far..
I'm liking the vox-lead.
I'd suggest ad some hat layers and work on the synth work: there's hardly any distinction between back- and foreground sounds. So some level checking involved here too.
All the luck!
-Jay |
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| dannyc |
thanks for that jay m i will work on those point you mentioned. :)
anyone else??? |
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