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[Hard Trance] Tholius - Poing
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| Tholius |
Hey guys,
This is a little snippet of my new track.
It's not finished yet, and when I finish it quality wise and the final touches, I'll post it up; but for now:
http://s31.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...RG3GA4QP918KQKS
Appreciate the time you've taken to listen.
Take care.
PS. Can you please tell me if it has an adequate "hook" or anything distinguishable to your ears. |
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| Connector |
Well... to be hard trance you actually have make the track hard. The kick is to weak (can't really hear it) (try multiple samples, compression), dont like the baseline... its to cheesy. imo. Try to make it darker and more agressive.
I liked the efx after 00:57 they were cool.
Not my style really. But good luck. |
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| theholyalex |
Hey
Kick seems to need some compression, it's pretty quiet. Maybe make the synth that plays fewer notes (4 notes per bar?) a little 'spikier'? It seems to be the pulse of the track so try to emphasise it a little more.
Like the little breakdown, but maybe lose some of the noise?
Good luck bud. |
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| DjMorpheus |
Review while listening:
- Kick is to flat and to weak
- Like the fx in the background (the dirty outback-one)
Snippet is short so i can't tell any more. I should take a look at the kick.
Keep it up and keep us informed! |
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| Tholius |
Hey guys...
Thanks for the review... yep, I now noticed the kick aswell... I'm making updates already, with funky little breakbeat vocals in there aswell...
ATM, the original is posted at my soundclick website:
www.soundclick.com/tholius
(Tholius - Poing (Rework))
I was just playing around seeing how the website works... so my "beta 2" version isn't up yet... but you can hear a more extensive sample there! |
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| kopi_luwak |
Not bad, pretty simple and ordinarie, needs some work but u have good ideas :D.
Keep it up :).
Kopi =o. |
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