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Ayahuasca - The Spirit Vine (Down Tempo Psy-trance)
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| dschroeds1237 |
hey everyone...
i made this killer psy/goa trance track at 115 bpm.
its some some really etheral synths and leads, and a phat acid-ish goa bass.
heres the link to the stream:
http://www.sectionzmusic.com/detail.asp?SZID=19638
it would be greatly appreciated if anyone would drop a line and tell me what they thought about it, some insight, some constructive criticism...
:crazy:
thanks
dj_entheogen |
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| s3nate |
| I liked it. I think you should make it more breakbeatish though like psy chillout, I dont really like the slow tempo stuff that much. |
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| dschroeds1237 |
| thanks for taking the time to listen man, so do you mean the song in a whole should be like the second half, but maybe with just more elaborate breaks? im no genius with breakbeats, so i dont know if the second half could be called breakbeat, but it wasnt the typical 4-to=the=floor like the first half. |
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| cybernetica |
listening as I comment... the site is slow.. takes eternities to load :(
The title reminds me instantly of 1200 mics' work :)
- nice jungle atmosphere in the beginning.
- great buildup of percussions and synths.
- the cutoff of the 303-type synth in the beginning goes too high.
- the percussion is great, however I dont really like the kick layered with the hat. I'd make the kick lower. Stronger in the bottom frequencies. maybe add delay on the hihat.
- AWESOME lead in the middle, great design of synths. That's what I like.
Okay, right now that the tracks is becoming a downtempo psychedelic hymn, the player on the site wont let me listen further :(
Gonna download it now and will give more comments later.
okay. Now listening to your breakdown and it works very well. The tune gets a nice laid back feeling here. Things get a little lighter and the track fades out calmer :) |
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| dschroeds1237 |
hey cybernetica, thanks for listening to my track, and telling me what you thought of it, i appreciate it. i had some people tell me that i also should not have had the 303-bass in the beginning cut off like it did after 4 measures. i have been considering just letting it play through... dont know. as far as it going to high, (teh res.) i would have to agree, but im waiting to change that and upload a new file once i fix some other errors. i have resorted to this site for help simply because its all about trance.... and i figured i could get bettter criticism here about this particular song, than at sectionz.... thanks again.
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