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[New track] Diwali (Original Mix)
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| [Alpha]Dave |
Hello all,
I've finished a new track, It's called "Diwali".
Have a listen and feedback would be very appreciated! :)
Diwali (Original Mix)
Cheers! |
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| [Alpha]Dave |
| Anyone? :nervous: |
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| luke.sykes |
hey man.
nice clean production, nice mix down.
personally i think that the lead need some more bottom end, i know it will make it a bitch to eq, but at the moment it seems to nasally, with some bottom end, will give alot of drive.
nice track though
keep up the good work. |
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| MfLI |
| quote: | Originally posted by [Alpha]Dave
Cheers! |
Promising till 0:30. I think the bass is a tad basic by sound. Pretty straight forward Intro. There could be more of the flute.
Again, the lead arp is from app. 1:00 to 1:40 is a tad flat, but then it gets better, but still lacking da phat.
The pause sweep and the rising following that is IMO the best part (at that point), but again the pattern might be more original.
Around 5:10> is well structured brining drive into the whole. The long outro seems to start already around 6:00 - I´d try to cut that shorter.
Trance is a difficult genre as it requires so much by the equipemment to really sound good. It may be I listened to this at a too quiet level. Would probably sound way better from MOS's PA´s than my PC speakers:D
My 2 cents
Regs,
-M |
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| Metalslug |
Very nice and professional sounding.
Good job.:D |
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| Andru C |
| keep it up man... u have wut it takes to be a great trance producer someday... =) |
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| Romi |
| I enjoyed it. Cool build up, nice break with nice melodies. You certainly have talent, but try to get the overall mix a bit more pro. I don't know what you are using to make your tracks, but now it sounds a bit empty, if it sounded a bit more pro this would be a very cool track. Try to use some more reverb, delay and effects. Overall a nice production, but it could sound a lot better. |
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| [Alpha]Dave |
| Thx alot guys for the feedback! :gsmile: |
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| EtherealSL |
name of the track caught my eye... it's almost season for diwali, any reason why you picked that name for your song?
as for the song, structure is pretty standard, nothing wrong with it, but in general, the song is too basic... would be better if you added some submelodies and layers to give the song some depth. |
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