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my first producing trance track
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| joffrey g |
hello everybody
I wonder what you think of my trance track
bad
o.k.
good
wonderful
greetz joffrey g
here is the link so you can listen :
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=601248&t=4892 |
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| djHollen |
hey there,
i thought i might check this out. dont take this the wrong way but this does sound like your new to producing... that aint a bad thing. that being said, this track does have potential if you flesh it out a bit more - add some effects, and some other pads and/or synths in order to create more depth.. unless you were going for a minimal quality which is something i personally have grown a respect for in the past year.
as far as producing techniques i can only go so far cuz im not the best producer in the world. but the bass definitely needs to be louder. maybe add a hihat sound on the third step of each beat. you know... kick hihat kick hihat.
as far as melody quality goes, i like it. it sucks at first cuz your dying to make a killer track but you might be limited by the knowledge of some stupid software program. keep at it though. itll pay off in ther end. i dont normally ask people tp do this but, if youd like, youre more than welcome to check out two of my (crappy?:crazy: :D )tracks here on TA.
best of luck wtih your work |
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| gowansy |
| i really like the melody on this. i'm new to producing as well so i cant really give u much advice. What i would do to it is add more pads and build the atmosphere more, and work more on the kick and percussion. |
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| Sparkunian |
For first try is good.Overall is ok.Change hihats and don't let the main melodie at break be so repetitive.Mastering is very good thought ;)
Good luck |
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