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[Melodic Trance] Romi - Technological World (full version) (pg. 2)
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Corteoz
Really good track! :)
Wanna do a track with me? I'm at about the same production level.
Just PM me, and I'll send you some of my stuff.

What sequencer do you use? I'm guessing FL.
Romi
Thanks again for the nice replies, and no, it's not signed yet, should it be?:)
groundzero74
Great opening (reverse cymbals excepted), percussion is nice and energetic.

I also like the introduction of the main lead before the break.

During the break it switches to "classic strings" didn't expect that ... but it works .
Introduction of the bassline during the Break isn't "massive" enough for my taste ;) (e.g."Delerium_Innocente_-_Tiesto Mix" ...yeah yeah yeah ... Tiesto, i know) ... but the lead is probably taking up to much headroom.

Melody is what i call real trance, as always from ROMi.

All in all, I LIKE IT !
richg101
upon listening many times i would say this track is very good indeed and ready for release but i agree with groundzero that the bass that comes in during the break isnt quite grabbing enough. it sounds perfect but maybe you could use a different bass sound thats less obvious?

however even after nit-picking, i would recon you have a viable track for release on a big label...
Four_On_Four-er
Killer track here. The buildup is perfect, the bass worked well.

Sure the bass in the buildup could have been improved a tad, but this is really good.

As a matter of fact - the leads and motif of the whole track remind me a little too much of Ferry Corsten's "Sublime (Thrillseekers Remix)" for comfort - but take that as a real compliment anyways. I was just listening to that today - shudders.
Redstar
hey romi

nice synths, percussions alright. nice break too. might have to play this out!
Stu Cox
Good tune, musically all there - nice melodies, pretty standard but effective layout.

Production is clean and pro-sounding, although not incredibly intricate - although that doesn't really detract from the quality of the track (I just tend to prefer really intricate production :p)

Only got a couple of thoughts - firstly, in the main break where the strings come in at 2:11 I think you could either do with more layers of strings to make it sound like a full orchestral job, really grab the atmosphere, or instead maybe put in some sweeping atmospheric kind of sounds to 'give it a bit more' if you know what I mean, keep it interesting.

Also, the perc in the main section could do with a bit more variation, it sounds like it's literally just a 2 bar loop which, although it doesn't sound bad, I think would sound better with more changes in the patterns to keep it interesting.

That's all ;)

6.5/10 - looks like I'm getting a bit precise in my old age :p

(Scale: 0 = don't bother, 1-3 = needs work, 4-5 = nearly there, 6-8 = releasable, 9-10 = outstanding)
Four_On_Four-er
I'm in love with this track... even though it's fairly standard for uplifting in terms of musical style, I can't get enough of that distorted oboe. It's so sad... I love it.
Romi
Thx for the comments:) .
Alien Yoshi
Very, very, very beautiful melody! One of the best tunes i heard here in last 6 monts.

Drik
Very good percussion and a funky beat. Great intro, the blips are really dreamy and interesting. Keeps a nice buildup.

One thing I thought of was maybe having some echo from some element hanging in the break so it doesnt get so quiet there.

Great strings and a sweet melody, good stuff this :D
Oooh, nice reentry of the drums :)

Maybe have some lead alternate to your main melody and fade in during around 5 min?

Good stuff anyway, well done!
AniG
wow, this track sounds interesting, ill have to give it a good listen later on tonight when i get uncapped for the start of the new month.

ill post once again with my review.
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