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Hi-C - Pacific Mint
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| wizniz |
hey guys this will be my 3rd submission to your opinions:
the recently finished and still occasionally edited "hi-c"
now im not a pro but id love your constructive criticm. :)
prog: FLstudio 5
instruments:
drum set
FM7
Pro-53
Sytrus
TS-404
as for the genre i'd guess at psy/experimental trance? lol
LINK HERE FOR HI-C
(also, mind you its a bit muddied down by purevolume so yes... i know :( )
thanks a lot in advance!
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| DJ Shibby |
Hello.
Some things you may want to look into in your future tracks:
- Kick needs more dynamics so it pumps; EQ it less, but make the EQ that you do use count. It sounds like a low rumble.
- The main synth instrument (the one that's acidy) sounds a little cheap, try adding some FX to it.
- The melody line creates a lot of dissonance which really puts the listener on edge. Also, perhaps it would be good to add another synth to thicken it if you like.
Things I noticed that you did well:
- Arrangement
- Good creativity in the intro
- Fills and leads
Good luck and thanks for sharing. :) |
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| wizniz |
| thanks! ill keep those tips in mind:D |
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| Sparkunian |
Ok.Some nice ideas here but mastering needs a lot of work.For ex at somepoints kick almost dissapear!Synth is too loud.Solo of the synth is too much for me and generally I have the image of an oldschool track that sometimes is good and sometimes bad.You said that is experimental but is not psy.Not my cup of tea anyway.
PS:Change please your location cause mine could be your moms bed!!! hahaha :crazy: |
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