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An MP3.com track by me..
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| oDrori |
Hello all!
I've recently uploaded a track I made called "Murky Fall".
It is available on http://www.mp3.com/oDrori and I'd be very thankful if you'll take a listen...
I know it has some flaws, but the more comments, the better;)
Thanks a lot to all who will check it out...:toothless |
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| clubzero |
Some constructive critiques :
The quality seems ok, but the main leads creates distortion at 0:05. The melody is kinda smooth, since it's uplifting and dark. The weird sound effect goes way too loud at times. I don't know what happens at 2:20! The melody is unfitting there. Rating : 6.2/10
Club Zero
www.soundclick.com/clubzero |
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| oDrori |
Yes I've been recieving these comments py folks (including myself)...
The track IS too loud at points I did a pretty crappy work out of mastering it...
The structure's a bit inconventional cause I do better at constructing club than radio...
I will soon upload a9 min long track which is better IMO...
Major thanx for replying Club Zero, there's nothing I appreciate more than opins, honest once= best!
Thank Yo!
P.S. I attached a piece of my next track... |
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| clubzero |
No problem. Attached where...? ;)
CZ |
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| oDrori |
I was sure I attached it...
Here goes, you'll have to rename it to .ra ... |
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| oDrori |
?!?!?!WTF?!
Hekk, how do I attach stuff here?!?!?! |
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| RTP |
Hey! That's rather my style ... I like that track! This one is really not bad! A bit dark, fast, progressive ... yeah, really not bad!
Keep it goin'... |
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| Peter Campbell |
love the start but it drags on to long.
boy lots of work needed here some of it sounds like your playing
a late 80s computer game.
the mixing levels need lots of work.
take the reverb off the kick its set to far back in the mix
and some of your samples have no reverb at all which makes
them to up front in the mix.
whats that DB level doing?
sound like your just starting Producing, keep on trying |
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| oDrori |
Thanx a lot for the comments, yes the DB level does suck major ass ;)
It is my first full production, I have another one left and another one that I've just finished!
The second one's clubbier, but I can't decide:
Upload now, or wait a while and add vocals to it...?
Anyone willing to help me about the decision?
I've got the words and everything ready... |
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