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[ trance ] Adam Kelly - Midnight Air
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| slyfoxark |
Hey everyone, its been a while since I have posted on the forums, does anyone remember me? I have a new track that I would like to get some feedback on. I am hoping to fix this one up and eventually send it out in a demo to labels. Its kinda short as far a trance tracks go, so I might end up extending it. Please tell me what you think. Any feedback is appreciated! (Appreciated more if you actually say something beyond "its ok" or "it sucks balls, you should kill yourself") ha ha Thanks.
[ trance ] Adam Kelly - Midnight Air
- Adam Kelly :) |
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| RickyM |
| Hey man - you have some nice melody ideas here - you just need some structure to the track I think - but keep it up! |
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| Desty Nova |
Synth melodies sound really cool. It changes enough to keep it interesting too, in my opinion.
-Alex |
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| slyfoxark |
RickyM, could you go a bit more into the structure thing? Maybe give me an idea of how I can fix that...
Thanks for the comments by the way guys. |
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| Takkra |
melody sounds really sweet man! nice synth fx.
I like the way you fade the kick in.
break is really cool! I had expected more drive after the breakdown.. add some 4x4 hihats or something.. melody sounds really nice though anyway :p, you can make something out if this man!
keep it up |
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| slyfoxark |
| I just wanted to renew this thread to see if anyone else had anything to say about it. Thanks!! |
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