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Nomen Nescio - Elevate (original mix, 192kpbs, Upl. trance) (pg. 2)
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| pho mo |
Hey man, nice tune! The most standout feature for me is the energy in this track, it's got a real drive. Probably to do with the percs + bassline, which are excellent. Melody is nice, and the whole tune is really uplifting.
Mentions of ASOT and spiral are probably appropriate, but that's a pretty high standard and you've achieved something almost on par which is really outstanding.
Production-wise it's pretty tight, but I think you overused the falling star quite a bit, and on the soundclick hi-fi stream it was sounding a little bit thin overall, not sure if the encoding did that but it's definitely lacking a bit of thump in the bass.
Excellent work! |
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| Nomen Nescio |
Wow getting some very enthusiastic response here. That means a lot to me :)
Kris Xperiment : No I do not mind when you put this track on your mp3 player. Just don't distribute it to other people please ;) Regarding the build up, if I had extended it I am prettu sure commennts on here would have been "build up takes too long" so that was a deliberate choice and I think it is decent enough as it is
Iron Fist : Thanks mate! Glad you like the track. You spooked me though, Dart Vader has a scary voice haha. Looking forward to a new Kris track now as well :) Good thing of TA is that we fellow producers push each other to the limits to get better.
Pho Mo : Wow that is a nice reply. Thanks mate. Glad you think this track is almost up to par with Spiral. For the record guys, I do not have the illussion that I am in the same league as those producers :)
And yes the lack of bass defitately has something to do with the encoding on Soundclick. For some reason the Soundclick player adds more treble and leaves out a bit of bass. Also this is just the 192 version. I have compared the 320 version on my pc with the 192 version on Soundclick and in the 320 version there is a better bass and less high.
Keep them coming people :) |
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| sm44 |
| Really nice track, love the melody and strings. Good energy. Cant really find anything wrong with it. |
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| Nomen Nescio |
| Thanks sm44, again someone who likes the track. This is going well :) Cheers mate and good luck on updating your project! |
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| ac dc |
Quote Nomen Nesio: Thanks Ac Dc (your name sounds as if you are listening to the wrong kind of music haha).
LOLS just to clarify... if im not wrong ac dc suppose to mean anti christ something something but NO.. im not..
i suppose to mean something like trance is like electricity but then i realise that its quite lame... lols but cant changed it... |
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| Takkra |
hey man.. I like the intro alot! the percs work really good with the bass.. the riffs feel really "sweet and cute" Dont know what that is but they just feel that way ;).. I think if you make this track more progressive then it will be really great! your up to something here! work this out man! I dont know why everyones complaining.. I like the song period. :p
maybe just maybe a more progressive build up version would be better imo..
de echte trance komt uit nederland he ;) |
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| Jay M |
Good kick. Nice full sounding. Melodies are nice at start.
But the bass has a delay which makes it very muddy, sound is too raw sounding. Eq lacks too, sounds are fighting to get a place in the mix. Percussion other than hats are hard to hear (the rim is raw and pulled to the max to make room). Hard to notice any variety beacause of it.. it hink it isn't there :)
Nice attempt, but mix doenst sound refined, in a way it's raw and harsh, not a real pleasure to listen to. Id suggest some additional eq-ing, cutting some from the high and low end of the synths maybe and clearing up the bass. Some panning on the hats and a little bit on the synths to make more room.
Good luck :)
-Jay |
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| Nomen Nescio |
Hey guys thanks for the feedback!
Takkra ja alle goede trance komt uit nederland he ;) Although Canadians and Americans are also pretty decent these days.
Jay M, I respect your criticism but when you start talking about panning the hi hats while they are already panned then I can't really do anything with it. Also I checked out your track Exuberance (which really is an awesome original track, my compliments for that) and I think you use too much low end and mtherefore sounds also get lost because of that ;) So I guess that is just the way you like to hear tracks with a whole lot of bass ;)
I am no expert on mastering but I do pan and stereoimage a lot and make sure a lot of sounds have their own place. As far as the high ends go, Soundclick for some reason has more treble then when I listen to the 320 version on my pc, so that one is less high you can trust me on that one ;)
Thanks everyone! |
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| Dhagor |
| im not very deeply into producing so i cant really comment the production side. i like the feeling the song gives ... hard to describe. i cant find anything 'wrong' in the song - just great work :) |
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| groundzero74 |
Nice & Clean Trance Track ... this is the type of trance i like. Only one remark... i think the "delayed percussion ticks" (dunno what you'd call it)are too much on the foreground... that's it .
| quote: | | Takkra ja alle goede trance komt uit nederland he |
En Belgïe is er weer niet bij...;) |
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| Nomen Nescio |
Thanks Dhagor and Groundzero74 :) Again two people who like the track. And yeah the woodblock is and the foreground a bit, that is true. But it is not that dominant I believe. It was intended to be a bit more on the foreground to create a sound that stands out as well besided the synths.
ooh and Groundzero to continue: Er komt wereldse trance uit Belgie, L-Vee en M.I.K.E reken ik tot mijn favoriete producers ;) Nederland en Belgie zijn top trancelanden :)
Thanks people! |
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| Kris Xperiment |
| I love tranceaddict, I love all you guys in it. Where here to cope with our addiction. |
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