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Aerium - North pacific (original mix)
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| richg101 |
the general vibe you got going down is worth sending out and the track sounds very cleanly done but it needs a bit of fine tuning...
your main pad is nice but dirtys the mix a bit and makes things lose drive...
i fully enjoyed this track however and especially the break.. very nice.
why not re arrange it a bit and have the melody within the break as it is now but when the beat comes back at 5;50 i would make the track more bassline driven with a long noted bass... similar to schulz's rms of ladyblue by airwave? also add one more prominant snare or something..
loads of potential imo. |
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| jetflag |
| (Y) thnx for the advice :) i'll see to that.... |
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| Desty Nova |
Beautiful melodies, sounds really good to me ,I really like this. Thanks for posting.:D
-Alex |
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| Lakeus |
Hi,
The sounds in the beginning are really clear... the main melody which comes at 2:15 could be a bit clearer, now the lead sound makes it blurry, especially after the pad comes in. The bassdrum lacks a bit of bottom end imo.
The melodies are really nice, chilled-out... You need to pay more attention to the drum sounds, now they sound a bit amateurish time to time.
There´s too much going on after 5:50... try eq:ing the different sounds ( and cutting out some frequencies ) so they aren´t all in the same frequencies.
I hope this helps... good work anyway!!
Cheers, Lakeus
Btw, check out my track if you´ve got the time and drop a few comments if you feel like it.
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=295769 |
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