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altuna - crystal sense (128kbps)
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| staticblue |
beginning sounding pretty solid, nice percs
nice high-bass coming at 30 seconds, i think the subbass is nice but needs more presence and power to it :) or just another layer, up to you ;)
darkish stuttery synths coming in the buildup :eek: about 2:00 i think it needs a bit more drive, maybe try some additionnal percs layers or something.
main melody is quite anthemic, but simple thats why i think it needs a more massive synth to support it and it will work very well !
definitly my favorite track from you uptill now, cool uplifting parts :thepirate |
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| alanzo |
The composition blows.
Mastering is ok, main lead is too loud and you can't hear the hats. |
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| DJ Dinz |
Thanks Jon.. + feedback.. i'll improve it...
n thnx too to alanzo.. its a motivation :) :)
cheers!
any more? :) |
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| Subtle |
nice drive, nice synths in the buildup..
breakdown sound ok, synths sounds good, but the melody u got there seems a bit too random for me, i would make the melody more linear, parts of the melody is cool, but the low end of the tracks lacks a bit..
it got good potential.. :thepirate |
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| DJ Dinz |
to Subtle.. + feedback again...
yeah i will add some element on the last climax.. thns dude
cheers! |
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| Aquarian |
Very much love the kick/bassline. Buildup has a nice, strong feel to it.
I felt that the breakdown should've been a bit more emotive. I'm not saying you should drag it on for days like in alot of productions these days, but just that you have this nice epic melody coming out of nowhere, and it all just seems so sudden.
The melody itself is very nice, but I think I agree with whoever said it needs a thicker, more powerful synth supporting it. Not that the one you have now isn't good.
Overall it's very good, and has alot of energy to it.
By the way, did you ever finish altuna? |
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