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as some of u guys know, im a film maker, i usually make comedies and parodies of movies and shows. I left my other group CT-Productions to make my own films now. Me and a good friend of mine wrote a script for a mini series that will be available for download on the net called Vigilantes. This is episode one.
Who do u guys think?
I can’t wait to hear your feedback.
btw we have a budget of $500.
Vigilantes EPISODE 1
Script By: Minhaj Hossain and David Iruegas
Prelude
[Narration]
In a city where crime runs rampant, and police are more corrupt than the criminals. Darkness overpowers society as more and more people turn into criminals, and turn to drugs. Police are only in it for the money, and just as it looks like there’s no way out… 3 soon to be vigilantes…
EPISODE ONE
[SCENE 1]
*Three people are walking down a street and talking about a local drug dealer who also runs the whole East York area*
Vigilante 1
“…yea, you wouldn’t believe this guy, he runs everything. Drug trafficking, Weapons, Prostitution, immigration, EVERYTHING!”
Vigilante 2
“Ok but can you at least tell us where the we are going?”
Vigilante 1
“I picked up a police scanner from this guy I know; he also wants to be a vigilante but...Well...Hes kinda...”
Vigilante 3
“Physically challenged and by that I mean FAT!”
Vigilante 2
“OK so what did you guys do with the scanner?”
Vigilante 3
“One of the cops was talking about how they should look out for this crime lord. And then he told them not to arrest him or anything since he is providing the chief with hookers, and drugs.
Vigilante 1
“Cocaine to be exact. He has other drugs too, but cocaine is specialty.”
Vigilante 2
“Ok then so what’s the plan?”
[FADE OUT, END OF SCENE 1]
[SCENE 2]
*The three stop at front of a house*
Vigilante 3
“Ok so let me explain again, you (points at Vigilante 2) take the front and me and him (Vigilante 1) will go in from the back”
Vigilante 1
“Ammo check”
*All three look and there guns and one of them loads it*
[IN THE CRACKHOUSE]
*We see the inside of the house, there is a person making a line of cocaine, about to sniff it all music is playing in the background and the TV is on but there is nothing on the channel, pure static. Vigilante 2 comes in to the room.*
Vigilante 2
“ALRIGHT MOTHER ******, PUT YOUR HAND ON YOU AND GET DOWN OF THE ING GROUND BEFORE I BLOW UR GOD DAMN HEAD OFF”
*We see a small room where the drug lord is looking at the mirror. He hears the screaming from the other room and quickly looks for his hand gun. He waits in front of the door. The screaming in the other room continues. Vigilante 1 and 3 come into the house through the back.*
Vigilante 2
“I got one, he was about to do a line of blow.”
Vigilante 3
“I ll search the house, for some clues.”
Vigilante 1
“Ok Sherlock”
Vigilante 3
“ You”
Vigilante 1
“Wait. (To Vigilante 2) Did you check this room?”
Vigilante 2
“No.”
*Just as when Vigilante 1 touches the door knob, the drug lord opens the door at the same time, shots Vigilante 1 in the arm and runs out the back door.”
Vigilante 1
“AAHH , THAT HURTS LIKE A MOTHER ******!”
*There is blood on Vigilante 1’s left arm. Vigilante 3 starts running after the drug lord.*
[END OF SCENE 2]
[SCENE 3]
*Vigilante 3 is chasing the drug lord down the street. The drug lord opens fire at Vigilante 3 but the fire is not accurate. Vigilante 3 does the same and his shoots aren’t accurate either. The drug lord sees a bus pulling over and gets on it, but Vigilante 3 can not get there on time to catch the bus. So the drug lord gets away.*
[END OF SCENE 3]
[SCENE 4]
*Back at the crack house, the crack head is hand cuffed on the ground. Vigilante 1 has a white piece of cloth raped around his arm to stop the bleeding.*
Vigilante 1
“That was him wasn’t it?”
Vigilante 2
“Well, did you get him?”
*There is silence in the room for about ten seconds*
Vigilante 2
“He got away didn’t he?”
Vigilante 3
“That was my brother”
END OF EPISODE 1
TO BE CONTINUED
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