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Yahel & Eyal Barka - Voyage [Action Level Remix]
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| Action Level |
So, TA Remix Competition 7th Edition is over.
My remix is 7/15
Do you want to hear it? Here is a link:
DOWNLOAD
I havent too much time for work on it, because i knew it about 21th of september, and deadline was 24th :(. Thats why i create my remix about 6-8 hours at all.
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REMIX 1
Judge 1:
"I like the percussions in this track, it kicks off really nice, I'm not liking the sounds used for the main melodies, sound too typical , in a few words , not my cup of tea.
The Overall sound , well it sounds professional, I think the main melody could use a bit less of volume, but that is me. There is no originality in the structure of the track, even more, it seems like the producer all what he did was to change the lead sounds, add new percussions and some atmospheres, but left it intact as the original"
Creativity: 6.0 / Overall Sound: 9.0 / Melody : 7.0 / Structure: 7.0
Total: 29.0
Judge 2:
Excellent structure and arrangement. This is another guy who's used the original melody to the absolute full, and with some great new ideas added too. It's hard to find fault with this one really, the break is simply beautiful, it pulls me in and surrounds me. Maybe the percs could do with a tiny bit more variation, but they're still very professional. It gets a tiny bit repeditive towards the end ... not sure if I'd knock it for that though.
Creativity: 9
Overall Sound: 9
Melody: 10
Arrangement: 9
Total: 37
Judge 3:
Creativity:
6
Overall Sound
7
Melody
5
Arrangement
5
Total: 23.0
Judge 4:
"The Master is very good , I like the way way he put Yahel's melody there, it sounds really original in the Hard Trance genre, the structure of the track is a little weird, but all together it sounds really good and dynamic".
He gives an 8 for all areas.
Total: 32
Overall Score: 121 |
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P.S. dj's, lemme know if you would like to play it.
Cheers
/Pavel |
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| J.L. |
The summary:
Positive: use of synths, melody, sound quality
Negative: lack of originality
Hope that quick review helps
Maybe next time you'll have more time to do a remix! |
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| Axolotyl |
Pretty nice track mate. Production is very good and generally its pretty solid. You've definately kept the melody intact and although its fairly by the numbers so to speak, it definately kept my attention with the lush, thick sounds.
Nice work :toothless |
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| Aquarian |
I like your percussions in the intro. Very nice synths there too. Lots of energy. I could see this fitting well in a heavy kind of PVD-ish set. At 2:15 now and the intro feels like it's dragging on a little bit.
Break sounds nice. Your lead sound aint bad, but I'm pretty dissapointed to hear you kept those off-time notes from the midi rather than using the melody from the original track. Would've sounded alot better.
Not bad for a rushed remix. Your sounds are excellent, but the melody kinda ruins what could've been a much better remix otherwise. Nice job though! |
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| Action Level |
:cool: nice to see so good comments :tongue2
anybody else :rolleyes: |
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| Action Level |
| quote: | Originally posted by PDM
REMIX 1
Judge 1:
"I like the percussions in this track, it kicks off really nice, I'm not liking the sounds used for the main melodies, sound too typical , in a few words , not my cup of tea.
The Overall sound , well it sounds professional, I think the main melody could use a bit less of volume, but that is me. There is no originality in the structure of the track, even more, it seems like the producer all what he did was to change the lead sounds, add new percussions and some atmospheres, but left it intact as the original"
Creativity: 6.0 / Overall Sound: 9.0 / Melody : 7.0 / Structure: 7.0
Total: 29.0
Judge 2:
Excellent structure and arrangement. This is another guy who's used the original melody to the absolute full, and with some great new ideas added too. It's hard to find fault with this one really, the break is simply beautiful, it pulls me in and surrounds me. Maybe the percs could do with a tiny bit more variation, but they're still very professional. It gets a tiny bit repeditive towards the end ... not sure if I'd knock it for that though.
Creativity: 9
Overall Sound: 9
Melody: 10
Arrangement: 9
Total: 37
Judge 3:
Creativity:
6
Overall Sound
7
Melody
5
Arrangement
5
Total: 23.0
Judge 4:
"The Master is very good , I like the way way he put Yahel's melody there, it sounds really original in the Hard Trance genre, the structure of the track is a little weird, but all together it sounds really good and dynamic".
He gives an 8 for all areas.
Total: 32
Overall Score: 121 |
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| DJ_Ampz |
Not bad not bad. Sounds a little like it was remade, need some mastering. the idea is there and everything. Some mastering and definition....
7/10
Ampz |
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| Arctic Breeze |
| I like the two first minutes of your remix! Percussion is great, but I don't like the sound of the synths used in the main part. And it lacks originality. Too bad you didn't get more time to work with your remix. |
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| Action Level |
| quote: | Originally posted by DJ_Ampz
Not bad not bad. Sounds a little like it was remade, need some mastering. the idea is there and everything. Some mastering and definition....
7/10
Ampz |
yeah, i agree with 7/10 :tongue2
thanx for new comments |
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| moolow |
I really really like your remix. The synth u used for the melody is dreamy and that I like a lot :)
The percussions is good!
Maybe there could be a different bassline. It gets a litte monotone.
Good overalltrack!
Keep it up.
cheers.. :) |
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| Action Level |
| quote: | Originally posted by moolow
I really really like your remix. The synth u used for the melody is dreamy and that I like a lot :)
The percussions is good!
Maybe there could be a different bassline. It gets a litte monotone.
Good overalltrack!
Keep it up.
cheers.. :) |
:happy2: thank you my friend :tongue2 |
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